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Always be my baby

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Suzanne
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0 posted 03-29-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for Suzanne   Email Suzanne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suzanne


Always Be My Baby

I must admit it hurts
to see you so into her
you two seem so happy
being what we were
I should have been more open
and told you how I felt
when you gave me that little smile
and made my heart melt
I must admit I miss
all the small things you would do
the things that made me fall so deep
so deep in love with you
the way you always made me laugh
when I was having a bad day
or played with my fingers
in the cutest little way
I must admit I think
about the way things used to be
and how things have changed so much
between you and me
im sure well be together again
our feelings come and go
but you'll always be my baby
that I want you to always know


© Copyright 2000 Suzanne - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 03-29-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Heartfelt poem! And welcome to Passions, Suzanne! I enjoyed this and will be looking for more of your work. Best of luck to you in this relationship.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Elizabeth
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Heartfelt poem! And welcome to Passions, Suzanne! I enjoyed this and will be looking for more of your work. Best of luck to you in this relationship.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 03-29-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

it's funny what we remember about a person when their gone...tough subject..nicely done.

 
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 03-29-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Thought this poem was well written.  Good rhyme pattern expression.
Welcome to Passions.  
Poet deVine
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5 posted 03-29-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. This is such a sad poem....I look forward to reading more from you.  
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6 posted 03-29-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Suzanne~

Welcome to our family of friends and poets.
Enjoyed your poem.
~*Marge*~

    


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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-29-2000).]
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Welcome to Passions!!!

This was a heart opening and soul searching piece.  You write with alot of deep feelings. Look forward to reading more!
EagleOne
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8 posted 03-29-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Annother welcome....
It's sad, and painfull to realise what we've lost.
Suzanne
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9 posted 03-30-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Suzanne   Email Suzanne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suzanne

Thank you all for the replys. Its nice to know you all enjoy my poems and I hope to have some more up soon. I enjoy reading all of your poems too, thanx again  
~*~Suzanne~*~
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Words from ones heart can never be bad...welcome to passions  
Cerenity
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11 posted 03-30-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Suzanne,

Welcome to passions
This poem came from the heart it was wonderfully expressed.

Look forward to more of your work

Cerenity
JamesMichael
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12 posted 03-30-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is lovely to see a little piece of your soft heart.   I loved the title and the thoughts are beautiful.  James
TerryW
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13 posted 03-30-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Lovely and heartfelt poem, Suzanne!
   Wonderfully worded.  Welcome to our little family here at passions!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
 
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