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Make it alright

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vandana
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0 posted 03-29-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


The sun is high,
Our hearts are hurt,
Today,
The sun has come out,
The night is gone,
We can make the things alright,
We can work it out,
Nights turned days,
As the world turns,
The snow falls ,
and the things ain't right,
But I still feel,
in my heart,There's hope for us
to make it alright,
The day will be brighter than yesterdays,
you will see
we soon find our ways
and make this love stronger than before,
Take my hand ,
we'll hold hands,
Tell the things will be alright,
We'll make it alright,
Make it alright,
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1 posted 03-29-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I hope that things are all right soon, Vandana!

Elizabeth


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Mike
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2 posted 03-29-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice Vandana...  I liked this one a lot.
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I like this one  
 
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