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vandana
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0 posted 2000-03-29 05:40 PM



The sun is high,
Our hearts are hurt,
Today,
The sun has come out,
The night is gone,
We can make the things alright,
We can work it out,
Nights turned days,
As the world turns,
The snow falls ,
and the things ain't right,
But I still feel,
in my heart,There's hope for us
to make it alright,
The day will be brighter than yesterdays,
you will see
we soon find our ways
and make this love stronger than before,
Take my hand ,
we'll hold hands,
Tell the things will be alright,
We'll make it alright,
Make it alright,

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-03-29 05:55 PM


I hope that things are all right soon, Vandana!

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


Mike
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2 posted 2000-03-29 06:28 PM


Very nice Vandana...  I liked this one a lot.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-03-30 08:42 AM


I like this one  
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