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star 15
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0 posted 03-29-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for star 15   Email star 15   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for star 15

This poem is about a time when me and my bf broke up


  I CRIED THE CRY OF MEMORIES.


I cried that night
that night when you broke my heart
i cried because
i thought our love could last
i cried that night remabering
remambering how much fun we had.
i cried that night
rembering the first time we kissed
i cried that night
realizing all we had was memories
memories was all we had
i cried that night realzing the meaning will be there
and you will not
i cried that night
i cried into my pillow
i cried longing for you touch
longing for forgiveness
i cried wishing you were here
i cried until i could cry no more
i cried the cry of memories.




 
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TerryW
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since 03-23-2000
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1 posted 03-29-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Very Good, star!
   Welcome to the passions family!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 03-29-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

WE have all been there and cried those same tears...never easy..nicely done.

 
mete out
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3 posted 03-30-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Star,
One of the hardest things to face in life is lost love.
You at least can draw strength from the knowledge that you have a great writing talent.          
Great first post and welcome to Passions.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Enola
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England


4 posted 03-30-2000 04:30 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

I remember when I broke up with my boyfriend, I felt such a horrible void.  If you're feeling this too, then fill that void with poetry, because this poem is great & I can't wait to read more!  Welcome to Passions!

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 03-30-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yeah its really like that..I remember when I broke up with my girlfriend Nancy and we were together for about 2 years...and we only live a few blocks apart..and I started walking home to my house and I was crying like crazy and suddenly it started pouring down rain...raining cats and dogs..and my girlfriend pulled up in her Volkswagen and said get in James you'll get soaked...and I already was..I told her to leave me alone..and I walked home crying in the rain...sad memories...James
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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