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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 03-29-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Before me I see a man
His heart is bigger than all the land
It radiates warmth and love
Gentle like the wings of a dove
His voice is sweet and soft
To heaven it's song will be loft
It found a way into my heart
And from there never will it part

His heart is one with mine
With true love that is the sign
To him I give mind, body, and soul
All that I am to make him whole
For my heart holds the missing piece
That will give his pain sweet release
His smile lights up this room
And frees me from impending doom

His love is all that I ask
I need it to complete the task
That is now at hand
See the writing in the sand
This is my hopeful vision
Making it reality is my mission
My heart will not stop
Until from it the last blood does drop



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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TerryW
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1 posted 03-29-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

That was so lovely!  It really touched my heart.  My favorite part is:
My heart will not stop
Until from it the last blood does drop


Lovely ending.  That is the way I try to be also!    

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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2 posted 03-29-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

..full of feelings, chasing that shadow of love as I am too....
CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 03-29-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

I love reading your poetry...you can feel that it just flows from your heart and soul..lovely.

 
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4 posted 03-29-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I hope you gave this to that man! Very nice.  
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 03-29-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Terry...thank you for the nice comments.  I will not stop.  Have to keep trying at least.  Glad to hear you are that way also.  

Slashed soul...thanks.  Yes, they are my feelings and the chase is on!!!

Cheryl...thank you and yes it does.  Sometimes it amazes me how well it transfers onto paper.  

PDV...yes, I did and he thought it was very nice also.  Thank you!!!  

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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LW
This is magnificent!!!! You write from deep within and it shows with every word how pure you are "deep within".  Loved it!!
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7 posted 03-29-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~
A beautiful loving poem.
Enjoyed it so much.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 03-29-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Hey LW. . . I have to go with Marge here on this one. . . you have indeed written from the heart. . .

Excellent. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Lone Wolf
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9 posted 03-30-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Butterflies....thank you so much for the kind words!!!  Yes, I do write from within be it pain or love or whatever.  My feelings have always ran deep within.  Glad you liked it!!  

Marge....thank you for the sweet comment and happy that you enjoyed it.  I enjoyed writing it a lot!!

Sven....thank you and my heart was hanging from my sleeve on this one.  I am very happy to hear that you liked it.     

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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