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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 03-29-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

I am vowing to recommit
So that we may reach the summit
Stretching striving for the peak
This is no place for the weak

I will do what it takes
To try and replant the stakes
That have slowly fell apart
Now it's time to restart

Would you be my love again
And my one true best friend
This is how it should be
All about we, not he or she

Two individuals united as one
The bond that's felt is second to none
Each day filled with perfect bliss
Our happiness will be endless

This could be a vision of our marriage
With our child sleeping in a carriage
Silently he reaches out his tiny hand
And peace rules throughout the land


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


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VampDude
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1 posted 03-29-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Beautiful poem, Wolf. Great Job!

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Lucius Cade
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2 posted 03-29-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Great poem. I love the ending. Perfect.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 03-29-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Taking old love and trying to make it new again..admirable and extremely beautiful. Lovely poem.

 
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 03-29-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

VampDude....thanks, it's how I feel.

Lucius....thank you...I thought it was a fitting end.  Hopefully it will come true some day.

Cheryl....that is exactly whre I am right now.  Thanks!!

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 03-29-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

  
Lone Wolf,
This is beautiful and so well written.  Your words are a little hard to read right now as my husband and I are in our "last ditch effort" so I wish you all the luck in the stars.  *Angel Wing Hugs* to you.

hsystems
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6 posted 03-29-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Nice job, Lone Wolf!  Hope everything works out for you...

Troy


 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm
Lone Wolf
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7 posted 03-29-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Butterflies_don't_cry....thank you and perhaps we should e-mail sometime??  I see you are also from Michigan....we have much in common I think.  Good luck with your "last ditch effort".  I do relate and am about there myself.  We have to try one last time though.  Thank you for the hugs and please hang in there.  Send me an e-mail if you would like to speak further about things.  

Troy...thank you and I hope it does too.  Time will tell.

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--Michael W. Smith
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