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Slashed soul
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0 posted 03-29-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

In the silence of my sleep,
I fall in love - I fall in deep.
This woman of my dreams -is everthing-it seems.
I touched her skin, forbidden land - as I am,a married man.
Touching, kissing, in I go -heart on sleeve no guilt on show.

Passion explodes, mind overload.
This woman drives me insane...
We make love all night, and tomorrow we do it again.

I smashed the glass block of trust,
I smashed it with my lust..
Christ it was good!

Soul ripped apart,broken heart, my lover has gone.
Guilt creeps in, the ultimate sin, time for a fresh start.


nothing lasts forever......

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Collins
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1 posted 03-29-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

I think we both write in a very simular manner. This is a very deep poem. It is beautiful.
CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 03-29-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Uh wow...is it hot in here or is it just me..lol..great poem..nicely done.

 
Corinne
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Lessons, it's all about lessons.

Corinne
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 03-29-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Very nice poem.  Rough subject though and tough position you are in.  Good luck.

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TerryW
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5 posted 03-29-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Very expressive work on such a touching subject!   Welcome to passions!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
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6 posted 03-29-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. There is a great deal of emotion in this poem...  
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7 posted 03-29-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Ouch.  And oh how I do sympathize...Welcome!
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