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TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

0 posted 2000-03-29 10:53 AM

Forever Lasting Love

I feel you in my very soul
This springtime misty eve,
The coolness of the evening air
My spirit does relieve.

I turn my face upwards to the sky
To the softest shower of rain
And taste the kiss of the sweet cool drops
As they ease away my pain.

The gentle breeze sent over me
By silent brother wind
Dances across my rain soaked face
And caresses my tired skin.

"My love," I whisper in the wind
Hoping that you will hear
For I think of you every single moment
Though I know you are not here.

And though you were taken from me
I will never forget your love;
My love for you is deeper than the deepest sea,
Higher than the heavens above.

So though you had to leave too soon,
I pray you will understand
Until I again will be with you
Here with my forever lasting love I stand.

Terry Woodson

Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2000-03-29 10:59 AM

Cool poem, it touched my heart, love does last forever, but only when it's true, and you can't let anything stand in your way . I will try and read some more of your poetry, it is very good .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-29 11:09 AM

This is so touchingly beautiful, Terry. Very well written.

Denise

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

3 posted 2000-03-29 12:19 PM

Thanks, Denise. I appreciate your kind words. I love to read your poems also, they are very truthful and heartfelt.

Angelswing, I have a few others out there, and I think you would enjoy them.

Thanks guys!

T

Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

CherylLynnMckee
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 215

4 posted 2000-03-29 12:28 PM

Lovely thoughts..and very beautiful.

Panthers Chrysalis
Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 51

5 posted 2000-03-29 02:05 PM

Spectacular poem! Very moving!... Reminds me of the song... "kiss the rain"... "whenever you're lonely"...I will be sure and look for more of your work!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-03-29 02:40 PM

Terry....very sweet sentiments echoed in this one. I love it!!! The ending was just perfect. Great work!!!

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Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

7 posted 2000-03-30 11:39 AM

Thanks, Guys!
This one was dedicated to a friend I lost about 8 years ago (while we were in high school). One of my dearest friends, she was hit by a drunk driver one afternoon after school. So if you are looking down, Ronda, I still miss you!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2000-03-30 11:28 PM

I turn my face upwards to the sky
To the softest shower of rain
And taste the kiss of the sweet cool drops
As they ease away my pain.

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"My love," I whisper in the wind
Hoping that you will hear
For I think of you every single moment
Though I know you are not here.

And though you were taken from me
I will never forget your love;
My love for you is deeper than the deepest sea,
Higher than the heavens above.

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this poem is amazing and touches me deeply...
very beautifully written with your devotion and heart.
a perfect tribute.
take care, jm

Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

9 posted 2000-03-30 11:52 PM

This was absolutly beautiful~
You amaze me Terry~
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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