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Forever Lasting Love

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TerryW
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0 posted 03-29-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Forever Lasting Love

I feel you in my very soul
This springtime misty eve,
The coolness of the evening air
My spirit does relieve.

I turn my face upwards to the sky
To the softest shower of rain
And taste the kiss of the sweet cool drops
As they ease away my pain.

The gentle breeze sent over me
By silent brother wind
Dances across my rain soaked face
And caresses my tired skin.

"My love," I whisper in the wind
Hoping that you will hear
For I think of you every single moment
Though I know you are not here.

And though you were taken from me
I will never forget your love;
My love for you is deeper than the deepest sea,
Higher than the heavens above.

So though you had to leave too soon,
I pray you will understand
Until I again will be with you
Here with my forever lasting love I stand.

Terry Woodson



 Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
© Copyright 2000 Terry A. Woodson, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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1 posted 03-29-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Cool poem, it touched my heart, love does last forever, but only when it's true, and you can't let anything stand in your way . I will try and read some more of your poetry, it is very good .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Denise
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2 posted 03-29-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so touchingly beautiful, Terry. Very well written.

Denise
TerryW
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3 posted 03-29-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Thanks, Denise.  I appreciate your kind words.  I love to read your poems also, they are very truthful and heartfelt.

Angelswing, I have a few others out there, and I think you would enjoy them.

Thanks guys!      


T

 Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
CherylLynnMckee
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4 posted 03-29-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Lovely thoughts..and very beautiful.

 
Panthers Chrysalis
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Spectacular poem! Very moving!... Reminds me of the song... "kiss the rain"... "whenever you're lonely"...I will be sure and look for more of your work!
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 03-29-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Terry....very sweet sentiments echoed in this one.  I love it!!!  The ending was just perfect.  Great work!!!

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
TerryW
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7 posted 03-30-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Thanks, Guys!  
  This one was dedicated to a friend I lost about 8 years ago (while we were in high school). One of my dearest friends, she was hit by a drunk driver one afternoon after school. So if you are looking down, Ronda, I still miss you!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Janet Marie
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8 posted 03-30-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I turn my face upwards to the sky
To the softest shower of rain
And taste the kiss of the sweet cool drops
As they ease away my pain.

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"My love," I whisper in the wind
Hoping that you will hear
For I think of you every single moment
Though I know you are not here.

And though you were taken from me
I will never forget your love;
My love for you is deeper than the deepest sea,
Higher than the heavens above.

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this poem is amazing and touches me deeply...
very beautifully written with your devotion and heart.
a perfect tribute.
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

mariee66
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9 posted 03-30-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

This was absolutly beautiful~
You amaze me Terry~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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