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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
He is all things to everyone And nothing to none He is the bender of your will He is the only one He is one of his own kind But likes to lose his mind He is an enigma, a paradox He is the traveler in time He is full of laughter and light Yet thrives in the dark of night He is blindness to all He is the eyes to your sight He is hatred and love But none of the above He is the foot out the door He is the hand in the glove He is the good and the bad Of all mankind has had He is what you call free will He is all that is happy or sad He stands for peace through violence And loves the utter silence He is the one who is out loud He is sub-conscience |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I was reading this and all the while trying to figure out who "He " was....great ending and 'tis very true  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He is one of his own kind But likes to lose his mind He is an enigma, a paradox He is the traveler in time He is full of laughter and light Yet thrives in the dark of night He is blindness to all He is the eyes to your sight --------------- He stands for peace through violence And loves the utter silence He is the one who is out loud He is sub-conscience -------------- HE IS DEEP>DEEP>DEEP  this is way cool...love the way your mind works...consciencious and sub...*S* stalking your mind, your jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
hmmm, a real thinker, this one. First thought was: God Then, saw your ending, but subconscious, hmmm, could also be a part of God? Corinne |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Nicely done..I to thought you were talking about god at first..You really captured all the emotions that runs threw are heads..its really good. |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
Thank you for the suspense. We have all been surprised. And how true. BB |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have spoken to the 'him' in me with this, JML. Thoughtful indeed...Thank you again, for the pondering. |
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