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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 03-29-2000 10:14 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

He is all things to everyone
And nothing to none
He is the bender of your will
He is the only one

He is one of his own kind
But likes to lose his mind
He is an enigma, a paradox
He is the traveler in time

He is full of laughter and light
Yet thrives in the dark of night
He is blindness to all
He is the eyes to your sight

He is hatred and love
But none of the above
He is the foot out the door
He is the hand in the glove

He is the good and the bad
Of all mankind has had
He is what you call free will
He is all that is happy or sad

He stands for peace through violence
And loves the utter silence
He is the one who is out loud
He is sub-conscience





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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 03-29-2000 10:39 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I was reading this and all the while trying to figure out who "He " was....great ending and 'tis very true  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-29-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

He is one of his own kind
But likes to lose his mind
He is an enigma, a paradox
He is the traveler in time

He is full of laughter and light
Yet thrives in the dark of night
He is blindness to all
He is the eyes to your sight

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He stands for peace through violence
And loves the utter silence
He is the one who is out loud
He is sub-conscience

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HE IS DEEP>DEEP>DEEP  
this is way cool...love the way your mind works...consciencious and sub...*S*
stalking your mind,
your jm



 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Corinne
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3 posted 03-29-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

hmmm, a real thinker, this one.

First thought was:  God
Then, saw your ending, but subconscious,
hmmm, could also be a part of God?

Corinne
CherylLynnMckee
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4 posted 03-29-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Nicely done..I to thought you were talking about god at first..You really captured all the emotions that runs threw are heads..its really good.

 
Billy Bolden
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5 posted 03-29-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Billy Bolden   Email Billy Bolden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy Bolden

Thank you for the suspense.  We have all been surprised.  And how true.
BB
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6 posted 03-29-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

You have spoken to the 'him' in me with this, JML.  Thoughtful indeed...Thank you again, for the pondering.
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