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Corazon
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0 posted 2000-03-29 10:13 AM



a thank you to a rainbow

the wipers on
rain making it hard to see, so
just by chance I turned to see
a double rainbow
the Author painted quick
a treasure just for me
a smile curves easy
as I think of a heart
where rainbows live
and I think of the smiles
that she spreads
to not just me
and at that same moment
the rainbow is gone
behind the hills and
I start to mist at the thought
of the rain
that brings the rainbows
and sends them again away
but smiles override
who can cry at a rainbow?
I have to smile
to see the little one
cradled on the side
a baby rainbow
in its mother's arms
and I have to thank
the lady who taught me
how to let rainbows
live in me.

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Local Rebel
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1 posted 2000-03-29 10:37 AM


Amen Corazon...not only a rainbow -- the pot of gold as well... and a treasure lost..
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-03-29 10:40 AM


A colorful picture you've painted here  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-03-29 10:51 AM


This is beautiful, Corazon. Very beautiful.

Denise

Corazon
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4 posted 2000-03-29 12:17 PM


thank you all, and rebel, yep, a pot of gold is the only thing I forgot to include   because for sure she is
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5 posted 2000-03-29 07:01 PM


So are you. *S* This is beautiful, O&O.
Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-03-29 10:05 PM


A beautiful tribute, indeed.......
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 2000-03-30 06:56 PM


Sweetheart: There is a baby rainbow in us all; it's just lurking, waiting and you my friend, have always had a rainbow in you and always will do..

Thank you

HUSG

Corazon
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8 posted 2000-03-30 06:59 PM


yes, but *you* helped me see it....it doesn't do me any good if I didn't know it was there...you made me believe in something better....big hugs lady
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