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Grains Of Sand |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Grains Of Sand As grains of sand tossed to the wind are the souls of the earth. The brightness of their caliber will depend on there self worth. As grains of sand in an hourglass each has its place underneath the stars, though no plan did one give for guidance to follow. Destiny being our fate, those that were tossed about fervently are blessed, those dimly lit are to fight life’s battles seemingly alone. Growth and change depend on the individual, limited vision is our own design, aiming for the stars our only choice. Given choice still does not mean the soul posses the strength to proceed, or to endure that which destiny has lay before us. Wisdom taken deep within will give brightness to a dimly lit path, choice was granted but no basis for a Foundation was laid. Choice then being our own to proceed with caution our aim, we strive towards our desired destiny, hopefully graced with brightly lit paths. By, Cerenity |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Wonderful Cerenity-1, well written and well said. BRAVO! INclan |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
An interesting poem on choice and destiny I like the image of the grains of sand  "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Beautiful..well said..are life is what we choose to make of it.I love the images portrayed in it to. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Cerenity! Lovely! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem....thought provoking take on destiny... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I was reminded of these words as I read your poem .... which is very wisely done. 'To see a world in a grain of sand And a heaven in a wildflower Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, And eternity in an hour.' William Blake Peace and hugs. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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