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Open Poetry #6

Early Morning Haiku

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-03-29 08:08 AM

screams shatter silence
Lover's joy or Foe's conflict
who can tell with cats

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

1 posted 2000-03-29 09:18 AM

I often wonder too are they screaming with pleasure
or is it get out of my space!!!

Haikus always impress me...I can't do 'em!!

"Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-03-29 10:42 AM

Hi INclan,

You said it, I think though around here it is pleasure by how many little ones are running about.

Cerenity

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-29 10:45 AM

I've often wondered the same thing! This is cute, INclan!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-03-29 11:18 AM

ROFL...love it!!!!!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2000-03-29 03:41 PM

What a way to wake up.....

Thank you, Tess. Don't give up on Haiku...it is nice not having to rhyme.

Thank you, Cerenity-1. I grew up in the country...I know what you mean.

Thank you, dsnyder. If you find the answer, tell me and we will both know...

Thank you, Ruth. I have been writing a lot of serious material lately. I am happy to write something well, with good humor. I am glad to have put a smile on your face.

INclan

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

6 posted 2000-03-30 02:49 PM

Ah INclan, the mental pictures you create...

I liked this very much, although it explains to me why I am a dog person, lol.

Joanna

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2000-03-30 03:11 PM

In human wild life
don't separate fighting cats
painted nails scratch

....
Loved the haiku.

Parker

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

8 posted 2000-03-30 11:11 PM

Thank you Joannak and Haleyja. A very nice Haiku yourself, Haleyja. I like dogs as well, Joanna!!!

INclan

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