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The Secret Lies of Love (maybe my best one yet!)

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Jone
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0 posted 03-28-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

The rose pedels are red,
They lay perfectly across the bed.
In hope, and aniticpation,
of soon being distrubed.

They hope to fly into the air.
To fly free, without a care.
To be sprung loose and away,
Throughout the night and day.

They want to feel the love of two,
Move around on them like it's new.
They want to watch from all around,
These new lovers love and hold.

But these flowers know not the lie,
That the people hold so true.
They may soar, they may fly high,
But if they knew the truth, they would turn blue.

For what the flowers are blind to see,
Are that these new lovers, are old lovers indeed.

They before have never loved,
For there is another at home,
Who is waiting to love them more.

What the pedels see is passion,
Romance,
Power,
Attraction.

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The rose pedels are red,
They lay perfectly across the bed.
In hope, and aniticpation,
of soon being distrubed.

But these pedels, they do not move.
For the person who spread them is not around.
They are sitting in front of the tube.
For the one that they need to hold,
Is busy, distrubing someone else's rose pedels.




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Jone
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1 posted 03-28-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

This isn't based in any part on real life

just a little thought that came to mind

peace out
Poet deVine
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2 posted 03-29-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is a pretty good attempt here...some of the words are misspelled, so you may want to work on that. If I can be of any help please call on me! Keep writing!  
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 03-29-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Try writing your poems in a word processor and running them through a spell check before posting...I am notirious for spelling mistakes so do all of mine that way. I'd like to find a chat program that has spell check   Little things like that can distract from a good poem. Looking forward to reading some others  
Denise
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4 posted 03-29-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad poem. I'm sure it happens more often than I'd like to think.

Denise
Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 03-29-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

This is really quite good

Rex}>{{{{o>
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 03-29-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Nice poem....sad that things like that happen everyday to innocent people though.

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Jone
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7 posted 03-29-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

i know that the spelling mistakes are there.... i choose to express myself through them.. as we are all imperfect... i close my eyes and write... if i miss a key, i cannot correct it.... because it would no longer have be written in the moment
 
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