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Poem for whoever. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
(Forgive any spelling mistakes please. I'm in the U.K. and its 2.30 in the morning.) love no more. Tears co-ellese and castcade to the floor, Rest my wiery heart for love is no more. In my frigile heart i did not concive, If i told her i loved her, She would walk out and leave. Remove all my feelings and hide them far away, Take down all the rainbows and paint them all grey. Broardcast my emotions on a t.v. show, Shout it from the rooftops, let the people know! It's my love which has been denided, it's me who still wishes you were mine. Collins. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The words matter not when the message is so painfully clear. In the darkness our souls seem to open and release the demons that are under lock and key in the day...you released them with grace and an acute sense of pain. **Angel Wing Hugs** to embrace you in the night. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
If your still there butterflys don't cry. Thankyou. XXX #  ) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I was going to quick jot a "you're so very welcome" note to your e-mail but I see you don't have one posted...so You are so very welcome here  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is the coolest poem Collins..especially liked the line.."Take down all the rainbows and paint them all grey." This really displays the array of emotions we put into romantic relationships hoping our love will stay and how quickly our world can come crashing down if our love chooses to go away. james [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your emotions are sung loud and clear.. sometimes the best poetry is a little flawed..but because it's from your heart, it's perfect.  |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I really like your poetry..you have a way of drawing people in..You can really feel your pain..and thats a gift |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Collins - It's nice to have you here at Passions. I think you'll find that your heart will be embraced here.....  |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
ChryllLynnMcKnee thank you. xxx |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Collins.....beautiful poem. So sad that we never know what we have until it gone, isn't it? Hang in there....if it is truly yours, it will come back. --------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
I'm sure it will one day. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...this one is packed full of emotions and so very sad  Welcome to passions by the way |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
cheers hoot_owl. Thank you. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Any comments on this poem are welcome. XXX |
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