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Collins
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0 posted 03-28-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

(Forgive any spelling mistakes please. I'm in the U.K. and its 2.30 in the morning.)

love no more.


Tears co-ellese and castcade to the floor,
Rest my wiery heart for love is no more.

In my frigile heart i did not concive,
If i told her i loved her,
She would walk out and leave.

Remove all my feelings and hide them far away,
Take down all the rainbows and paint them all grey.

Broardcast my emotions on a t.v. show,
Shout it from the rooftops, let the people know!

It's my love which has been denided,
it's me who still wishes you were mine.


Collins.
© Copyright 2000 Collins - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 03-28-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

The words matter not when the message is so painfully clear.  In the darkness our souls seem to open and release the demons that are under lock and key in the day...you released them with grace and an acute sense of pain.
**Angel Wing Hugs** to embrace you in the night.
Collins
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2 posted 03-28-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

If your still there butterflys don't cry. Thankyou. XXX  # )
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 03-28-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I was going to quick jot a "you're so very welcome" note to your e-mail but I see you don't have one posted...so You are so very welcome here    
JamesMichael
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4 posted 03-28-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is the coolest poem Collins..especially liked the line.."Take down all the rainbows and paint them all grey."  This really displays the array of emotions we put into romantic relationships hoping our love will stay and how quickly our world can come crashing down if our love chooses to go away.   james

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 03-29-2000).]
Poet deVine
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5 posted 03-29-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Your emotions are sung loud and clear.. sometimes the best poetry is a little flawed..but because it's from your heart, it's perfect.  
CherylLynnMckee
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6 posted 03-29-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

I really like your poetry..you have a way of drawing people in..You can really feel your pain..and thats a gift

 
Nan
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7 posted 03-29-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Collins - It's nice to have you here at Passions.  I think you'll find that your heart will be embraced here.....
Collins
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8 posted 03-29-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

ChryllLynnMcKnee thank you. xxx
Lone Wolf
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9 posted 03-29-2000 03:24 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Collins.....beautiful poem.  So sad that we never know what we have until it gone, isn't it?  Hang in there....if it is truly yours, it will come back.

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Collins
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10 posted 03-30-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

I'm sure it will one day.
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 03-30-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh...this one is packed full of emotions and so very sad  
Welcome to passions by the way  
Collins
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12 posted 03-30-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

cheers hoot_owl.  Thank you.
Collins
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13 posted 03-30-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

Any comments on this poem are welcome. XXX
 
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