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Poem for the disregarded.

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Collins
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0 posted 03-28-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

Disregarded.

A good night sleep cannot sooth my heart,
'nor a hearty meal restore my parts!!!
For I am lost within myself,
For I am resigned back to the shelf.
Love only brings heartache and thats the truth,
If you need more convincing i'm your proof.
© Copyright 2000 Collins - All Rights Reserved
CherylLynnMckee
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1 posted 03-28-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

To some degree..were all proof of that..you write here what we all have felt,to many times in are lives.Very nicely done!

 
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2 posted 03-28-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Collins,
We have all been there at one time or another in our lives, but remember.....nothing ventured, nothing gained.  Very heartfelt message.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 03-28-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

You are singing to my soul and making my heart break for your pain.  Your poetry is painfilled and raw with emotion.

**Angel Wing Hugs**
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4 posted 03-29-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

There's always a negative for every postive. Everything in life has it's hurts. But without that hurt you'll never appreciate the joy it can bring.
Collins
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5 posted 03-29-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

Thankyou everyone. It means alot.
angelswing
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6 posted 03-29-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

I thought that I had better read this one, it tells so much truth, I feel like that at the moment, it isn't the not geting your way thats hurtful, it's the fact that there is nouthing that you can do about it, that was a great poem, can you read minds ? because you have just written my thoughts down to every detail, Wounderful .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Collins
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7 posted 03-30-2000 04:47 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

Thank you angelswing.
mete out
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8 posted 03-30-2000 05:37 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Collins,
Another fine piece from you.
Raw is indeed the word. I love this because although it is introspective in alot of ways, so many peole can relate to it.
Well done!      


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Collins
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9 posted 03-30-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

Thanks bud. # )
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10 posted 03-31-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I think that shelf is mighty big...a lot of us are with you there! Good poem.  
Collins
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11 posted 03-31-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

i wish i wasn't!!!
Collins
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12 posted 04-02-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

nite everyone.
 
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