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CherylLynnMckee
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0 posted 03-28-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CherylLynnMckee



Bubbling clouds of pearls..
Painted by natures brush..
A canvas of irredescent blue..
Mutlicolored hues..
A spectator from the ground..
Ethereal heaven found..
An unearthly paradise..of flaxen and azzure..
Celestial for sure..
First blush of morningtide..upon the effervescent sky..
With all its beauty wide..
Singing like a melody..
a tabernacle choir..
Secret lyrics..
the birds of dawn can hear...
Enchanted..
voicing their replys..
The face of earth..
With traces of simplicity..
I lay entranced within..
Untouchable creation..
So elegantly adorned..
Feeling tender for a day anew..
Budding infancy..
With every newborn sky..
Another day presents..
Endless second tries.

 
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1 posted 03-28-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a beautiful picture painted in this poem.

Elizabeth


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-The Crucible

Billy Bolden
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2 posted 03-28-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for Billy Bolden   Email Billy Bolden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy Bolden

This is very nice use of rythem and color.  Like a painter selecting from his/her pallet.  Perhaps we can see more.
bb
Janet Marie
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3 posted 03-29-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

excellent...exquisite imagery... very well written...
take care, jm

                      

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Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
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hsystems
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4 posted 03-29-2000 02:27 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Wonderful!  You painted the blue sky right into my heart - made my day.  Thanks!  Nature  Lovers Unite!

Troy


 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm
tracie66
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5 posted 03-29-2000 05:22 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Most exquisite piece of poetry.
I thought this just wonderful and with excellent visionary
LoL
tracie


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6 posted 03-29-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins

I feel so honoured that you liked my poems, especially from a poet who writes such beautiful poems such as this one.   It shines!!!
CherylLynnMckee
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7 posted 03-29-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Thank-you to everyone..its most appreciated..There's so many talented people in here...it means alot to me that you enjoyed my poem and all your kind words to...Thanks again.

 
Rex Allen McCoy
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8 posted 03-29-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I loved this poem ... I think I might write a poem to welcome spring and nature and fresh air too ...
only mine might suck ... but what the heck

Rex}>{{{{o>
CherylLynnMckee
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9 posted 03-29-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

lol Rex...I know your poem would'nt suck in the least...I would look forward to reading it..and thanks for the nice words on mine.

 
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 03-29-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Cheryl,
You are very talented and I enjoy your work very much.
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 03-29-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Cheryl....beautiful words.  I see the blank page is your canvas....wow what a work of art you create!!  

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TerryW
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12 posted 03-29-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Absolutely lovely, Cheryl!   I love reading your work, because you generate the sweetest atmospheres!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.


hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 03-30-2000 08:39 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice imagery  
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