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a mess of thoughts

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zipknee
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0 posted 03-28-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

a mess of thoughts
running through my head
not one to make any sense
a sadness completely undeserved
to the life that leads me
fears totally irrational
for the needs and desires of my heart
searching through the shadows
that follow close behind me
for some small hint or clue
that will push me forward
instead of always falling backward.

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Very sad  

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oops

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Zipknee~
AHHHHhhhhhh
Don't you hate
it when that happens.
shake ur head really hard
and all the thought will come
flying out. Good but sad
poem. cheer up.*gives
you a balloon*
lol.....
    
~Angie



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