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zipknee
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 35
Oak Park, IL

0 posted 2000-03-28 10:47 AM


a mess of thoughts
running through my head
not one to make any sense
a sadness completely undeserved
to the life that leads me
fears totally irrational
for the needs and desires of my heart
searching through the shadows
that follow close behind me
for some small hint or clue
that will push me forward
instead of always falling backward.


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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 2000-03-28 12:30 PM


Very sad  

Denise

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
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2 posted 2000-03-28 03:21 PM


oops

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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
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3 posted 2000-03-28 03:22 PM



Zipknee~
AHHHHhhhhhh
Don't you hate
it when that happens.
shake ur head really hard
and all the thought will come
flying out. Good but sad
poem. cheer up.*gives
you a balloon*
lol.....
    
~Angie



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