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thoughts of my heart

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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 03-28-2000 04:38 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

This poem is dedicated to the love of my life

Dear love,

For some reason you are the one
and for you I write
the deepest thoughts of my heart

It may not rime
maybe I can't write
and I can't tell

HOW GREAT IS MY LOVE FOR YOU

This is not poetry
These aren't just words and sentences
These are my feelings
the reason of my living

For you I may cry and scream
For you I may let all my strange and scary
emotions out of me, and
I may let my heart lead my body
and I let myself go... to you

Because I trust you with my past
to forget
Because I trust you with my present
to live
And I trust you with my future
to wish

And I am yours...

Now I close my eyes
and I wish hard
I take your hand
take me away

Just because I love you
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mete out
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
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1 posted 03-28-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***BrazilianGirl,
This is absolutely brilliant.
I can relate to it so much. You certainly do have a talent for writing.  
You are very lucky...Sometimes love is the only thing that can lift us up and help us to carry on sometimes.

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