How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 Stolen
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Stolen

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


0 posted 03-28-2000 04:31 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mete out


2 o'clock again.
Time holds little value to me
When I feel like this.

There's a mould growing on my body.
I've not been held for so long.
Tactility escapes me
Because I feel so f***ing guilty.

I never thought it'd all blow up in my face.

I guess I never thought.



 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

© Copyright 2000 Louise Parsons - All Rights Reserved
Thinker
New Member
since 03-06-2000
Posts 8


1 posted 03-28-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Thinker   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Thinker

**************************************
Hey there..
I think that your writing is absolutly beautiful
and that you come from the heart.
I can see that you hurt andI want to do all that
I can to help you..
Your getting on with life so much better now
All you have to do is get used to the cycle of
life, and how ****ty it is, We cant all be happy
every day and its ok to cry occaisonally.
When you fall down Im going to be there to pick
you up and when You hurt Ill bandage your wounds.
Im here for you when ever you need me baby
And youll have made me the happiest man alive for
the last six months tommorow.
I wish I could do something fancy and nice but I
have no money.  
I love you with all my heart baby..
Your angel
Ryan
**************************************


 To think is a right
To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance
infinat3 sadn3ss
Member
since 02-14-2000
Posts 86
somerset england


2 posted 03-28-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

isnt he lovely, that reply put a massive smile on my face . i hope u realise how much we love you and need u(ryan may do a little more). i will always be here too.
that poem is one of those that concentrates a whole lot of emotion in a coulple of lines
love always
your best bud
cabes

i
could
make
this
reply
look
really
long
by
doing
this
but
i
think
ill
stop
now
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


3 posted 03-29-2000 05:23 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Babee,    
I think I said all that needed to be said yesterday.
This has been the happiest and most content 6 months of my life.
You mean the world to me babe.
   (refer to card!)
Love always,   Your Gold Dust.  
          


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Tess
Member
since 03-22-2000
Posts 291
Australia


4 posted 03-29-2000 07:47 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

I'm sitting here reading your poem..been offline for a few days..down in a deep black blue hole....and it's like..thats me thats me ....she's writing about me how does she know???? And thats it..so simple and rings so true...
hugs
Tess
INclan
Senior Member
since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
Indiana, USA


5 posted 03-29-2000 08:00 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Ah, poetry with a purpose!  I enjoyed the read.

INclan

[This message has been edited by INclan (edited 03-29-2000).]
Enola
Member
since 02-11-2000
Posts 138
England


6 posted 03-29-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

To the point, great & kicking ass as usual.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


7 posted 03-30-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Cabes,
Yeah, he's a sweetie isn't he?!
I know you'd never leave me Cabes, just like I'd never leave you.
We'll be eachother's crutches...yeah?
love lou  xxx

p.s. that's CRUTCHES, k?    

Tess,
Your writings have the same effect on me.
Check your mail.    And thanks.
  *Louise*

***INclan,
Thankyou, you flatter me.    

***Enola,
Awww, thankyou!
Your support for me means SO much.
I'm glad I know who you are now!
Luv Lou   xxx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 03-06-2000
Posts 3768
Michigan


8 posted 03-30-2000 07:47 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry



Mete** The words you write are so painful, never regret what your heart tells you...although those are the ones I can relate to regretting...do as I say not as I do..lol  Again you amaze me!!  
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


9 posted 03-31-2000 05:46 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Butterflies,
Wow, thankyou so much.
Another overly kind reply from you I feel.
Your support is so greatfully recieved.
Thank you again!    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


mete out will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> Stolen Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors