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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 03-28-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Here it is another day
More chances to push me away
You think it's wrong to want to be
One together you and me
I love you very much
My body longs for your touch
Why do you have to question
It gives me the wrong impression

Here it is another night
And so goes my plight
I try to move a little nearer
Hoping that your heart is dearer
Maybe we can set things aside
To allow expression for what's inside
Together we could create
A state where we realte

Here it is another day
What more do I have to say
Thoughts of you fill my head
Us together and in bed
Two hearts merge into one
The bliss created is second to none
Isn't it plain to see
This is our destiny




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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VampDude
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1 posted 03-28-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Wolf, superb poem.. bumps in a relationship are tough, very well thought out, and I love the rhyming scheme.

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Enola
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2 posted 03-28-2000 03:43 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

This is a lovely poem.  I hope it works out okay for you.  

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
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3 posted 03-28-2000 07:09 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~
Nice sentiments.
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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4 posted 03-28-2000 07:54 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Great poem
I to hope that it works out for you
HUGS
Tracie


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Lone Wolf
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5 posted 03-28-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

VampDude....thank you and yes the bumps are tough, but well worth what awaits on the other side.

Enola....thanks and time will tell.

Marge...glad to hear it.  They are my feelings as always.

Tracie....thanks for the hug.  We will see...

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 03-28-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

The closest love is often the one we take for granted, the one that will always be there so why "try"....your words are the voice to the song my heart hums.  You wrote this with the grace of an angel.
CherylLynnMckee
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7 posted 03-28-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Its hard when you feel like you love someone more than they love you..beautifully written.

 
Janet Marie
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8 posted 03-29-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

perfection in poetry LW...such sweet devotion in this...and excellent rhyme flow...very nice work.
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Lone Wolf
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9 posted 03-29-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Butterflies...You are so right that we do take love for granted at times.  It is only when that love is withdrawn that we miss it and realize what a great thing we had.  Hopefully, it is not too late.  Thank you so much for the angel comment.  It is what he used to call me....

Cheryl...always is hard, but I guess we keep trying because maybe someday that person will return our love tenfold.  Thanks.

JM...thank you.  The rhyme and flow just poured out one day.  I am hopelessly devoted to my beloved even if the feelings are not always the same.  He did think this was very nice though.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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