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Master and Jeannie on they're way to Vegas

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Jeannie
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25 posted 04-05-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

See my Master
why I left
you cant give him
what he's after
it's in the jar,
don't let him
push you that far.
If you release
the manuscript
to him
all my powers
will be as nasty
as whiskey sours.
I'm shaking
so bad
I'm gonna blink me
away from here
sorry I can't help
it's just that I fear
I know he say's
I am stronger,
but that was
when I was in love
and felt
I was loved back.
I'm weak now
been jarred to long
Wait I could
blink me
into someone else
any idea's Master?
E.Fudd
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26 posted 04-05-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for E.Fudd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for E.Fudd

Intewesting how , you all share this dewusion
Andwew , Wed ,and Cwatchit ,and without excwusion
Moose , and Tinkerbell , and wet's not forget Jeannie
That just goes to show ,you're all a bunch of weenies

Heh heh heh heh heh , you've all compwetewy fwipped
Evwyone bewieves , they're on some " Wizard " twip
Why don't you give it up , this "Wiz" ain't gonna show
A woom with wubber walls , is where you oughta go

Leonardo , Vince , Un-known , and don't forget One Flew
Realwy you're insane , I'll tell you what to do
Unwess you'd wather stay , in Never- Never wand
Scoot back to the "Stute" , don't do what Doc has pwanned



Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh



[This message has been edited by E.Fudd (edited 04-06-2000).]
Dr.Moose1
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27 posted 04-05-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Golly gee , what should I do
Elmer's trying to frighten you
Tell's you this is a delusion
All you see is an illusion

Gonna have to call his bluff
Really , I have had enough
If ignorance is truly bliss
Pardon me for saying this

Fudd's can't be measured
Unless this could be
Denominationally speaking
Dumb is times three

Yes Elmer it's true
One of us has to go
Understand this completely
'R my temper'll blow

Everyone here is seeking the Wiz
All that we ask is you mind your own biz
Maybe you're right and he'll never show
A fun time it has been , just looking you know

Return to your hunting for rabbits and such
One lunatic here is already too much
Only I've got some friends that joined in this quest
Now put down that pen and give it a rest !

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-05-2000).]
Danny Holloway
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28 posted 04-05-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Well, gee, never read so much on one post.
Nice writing everyone.
Lived in Las Vegas for several years so this was a fun return.
Dr.Moose1
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29 posted 04-06-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Danny me boy ,feel free to jump in any time.
Grab yourself an alias and join the crew .
Acrostics, pantoums , free verse , all are welcome , but to resolve our quest some-one seems to be stuck on villanelles. If in doubt
Ask Nan , or I may be able to give you a few hints .Glad you enjoyed !
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-06-2000).]
Andrew Scott
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30 posted 04-06-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Hey Doc Moose! What's up with the Fudd?
Everyone else is on this trip
Loonie Toon is that midget spud
Perhaps the Wiz fried his brain chip!

-----
And he thought he was the walrus! Hey John... get Paul to throw me some of those fish and chips off of George's plate.  Me and Ringo are a little famished over here.  Help... I need somebody... Help... hmmmm hmmm hmmm.  Hey boys... ya ain't seen a silly-bus tourin' about have ya?  Me and my fellow droogs from the 'Stute be lookin for our own magical mystery.

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 04-06-2000).]
Dr.Moose1
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31 posted 04-06-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

As thinking may become confused
With travelling far to be amused
At no borders shall we be refused

Cross-continent conveyance used
Oceans braved , by fate abused
As thinking may become confused

The " Wizard Villanelle " excused
With passions wit we are infused
At no borders shall we be refused

The five of three and one of four
Shall thwart our efforts here no more
As thinking may become confused

Fear not dear Jinn for at the core
All will come to know the score
At no borders shall we be refused

One conclusion gone before
None may know what lays in store
As thinking may become confused
At no borders shall we be refused



[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-06-2000).]
Jeannie
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32 posted 04-06-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

The Jinn is here for you Master have no fear
the fresh air helped clear my mind completely
I shall keep all of us safely out of harms tier.

My powers feel strong we'll reverse his gear
I came to the realization living life fills my voids
the Jinn is here for you Master have no fear.

Was in my bottle so long I lost my own reality
but now the Jinn is full of spunk and fully ready
the fresh air helped clear my mind completely.

We're gonna flush him out get in his ugly rear
take him down and get him where we need him
the Jinn is here for you Master have no fear.

Where is my jar Master we need it promptly
is it in the moosle car, you did take it with us?
The fresh air helped clear my mind completely.

I need one promise Master once we're done here
please let me continue being Jinn indefinitely
the Jinn is here for you Master have no fear
the fresh air helped clear my mind completely



Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!


33 posted 04-07-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I hear your voice as it beckons me to stay
yet than all my emotions will seem to fray
weak at just your sight as man made clay
once was putty creation now concrete tray.

A simple paper was all you felt you created
yet within me a curse of love's dart initiated
kindness from your heart took and infiltrated
every vitality of splendor you shaped dilated.

Where do I go now that you've cast me away
feeling like a dragon someone needs to slay
a signature I'm sure you'll want with no delay
for you and Juliet to have the freedom to play?

Sorry dearest Andrew I just get so frustrated
you gave me a castle into a world illustrated
you taught me how to draw as demonstrated
now all is dead as your creation is castrated.
Jeannie
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34 posted 04-08-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

I'm gonna take on the Wizard one on one
I won't give up the battle until all is done
he hates me enough he'll make mistakes.

I'm gonna blink myself up onto the stage
and watch his face when he goes into rage
I'm gonna take on the Wizard one on one.

He'll try and send me away watch and see
his powers will not work when he's all dizzy
he hates me enough he'll make mistakes.

I need to take him down right then and there
the embarrassment alone will give him scare
I'm gonna take on the Wizard one on one.

I can see he's aged since I last was with him
chances are his powers have become dim
he hates me enough he'll make mistakes.

The silly bus is a diversion for power failed
in a few minutes my act will become hailed
I'm gonna take on the Wizard one on one
he hates me enough he'll make mistakes.



Dr.Moose1
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35 posted 04-08-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

The Jinn's renewed with sense of self
this Wiz will tumble from his shelf
And so the quest we can resume
to Michigan , where Ron is roomed
Wizard Villanelle
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since 03-06-2000
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Alice of Oz


36 posted 04-09-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Wizard Villanelle   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Wizard Villanelle

I will put a spell on you all
Vegas magic ! It痴 a delight !
You値l see a 全tute company fall !

You think magic痴 unusual ?
Rest assured ! This is magic night !
I will put a spell on you all.

Jinn thinks she痴 good at betrayal,
But she値l lose if she dares to fight !
You値l see a 全tute company fall !

Counting on Moose for survival.
Ha ! You think for you he will fight ?
I will put a spell on you all !

I値l put you behind prison wall !
You better stay out of my sight !
You値l see a 全tute company fall.

Abracadabra ! Magic night
I dare Jinn to come here and fight !
You値l see a 全tute company fall !
I will put a spell on you all !!


[This message has been edited by Wizard Villanelle (edited 04-09-2000).]
Jeannie
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37 posted 04-09-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

I shall tickle you to kingdom come
see this yellow can it's full of foam
your act has always been so dumb.

A slow torture beginning with Rum
then I'll let my tricky fingers roam
I shall tickle you to kingdom come

I'll tickle you till you become numb
I remember your show at the dome
your act has always been so dumb

I bet nobody saw how a dirty crumb
can be tickled to death with a comb
I shall tickle you to kingdom come.

Wow, the audience is rolling a drum
I think they want you tickled home
your act has always been so dumb.

Now I shall tickle you with chrome
remember when together in Rome?
your act has always been so dumb
I shall tickle you to kingdom come.

  



[This message has been edited by Jeannie (edited 04-09-2000).]
Dr.Moose1
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38 posted 04-09-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

This tale will be told full well
For those who've fallen under spell
Entrance the Wizard Villanelle

As time through tide and ocean's swell
Rest most assured dear Tinkerbell
This tale will be told full well

Within this micro-cosmic shell
As in ,with-out , a concept jells
Entrance the Wizard Villanelle

For surely recognition dwells
In our attempts n'er to be quelled
This tale will be told full well

With form and function parallel
And leaps that would ... grace a gazelle
Entrance the Wizard Villanelle

Though time is brief do not short-sell
The end but only Ron may tell
Entrance the Wizard Villanelle
This tale will be told full well
Wizard Villanelle
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39 posted 04-09-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Wizard Villanelle   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Wizard Villanelle

AH ! No tickle, it will kill me !
The yellow comb is in your hand
I will die for the world to see !

Get away from me you Jeannie !
HA HA HA I can稚 stop laughing
AH ! No tickle, it will kill me !

You foul creature of treachery
Where did you hide this manuscript !
I will die for the world to see !

I値l curse you for eternity !
To never be heard of again !
AH ! No tickle, it will kill me !

ARGH ! My magic yell escapes me !
This is the end of Wizard V.
I will die for the world to see !

I send you without your powers
To never-never land towers
I will die for the world to see !
AH ! No tickle, it痴 killing me !
Dr.Moose1
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Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


40 posted 04-10-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

The "Wizard Villanelle's" not dead , alive and well within our heads
He was tickled to be one of us , all wing-nuts on the Silly-bus
Mourn him not and with elation , control things through Assimilation

As Jeannie's powers re-appear , she may return the path is clear
No longer will his spell hold sway , as now he's ruled by matter gray
The " Wizard Villanelle's" not dead , alive and well within our heads

We need not fear him any longer , what does not kill makes us the stronger
"One Flew " must have been mistaken , martinis stirred instead of shaken
Mourn him not and with elation , control things through Assimilation

Shall we continue with our quest , or by vote give this a rest ?
I call upon those who have read , continue on or stop at zed ?
The " Wizard Villanelle's " not dead , alive and well within our heads

T'would seem a shame to stop so close , but if on this you've over-dosed
I'll guide the plot into stagnation , and give the "Wiz" a long vacation
Mourn him not and with elation , control things through Assimilation

Cast your vote be it "yea" or " nay" ,continue on another day?
Good friends well met along the way ,advise me well for this I pray
The " Wizard Villanelle's " not dead , alive and well within our heads
Mourn him not and with elation , control things through Assimilation

( You are now leaving Assimilation , Nevada
Elevation : between 0 & 7 ft. above ground level .Population: varies according to the Silly-bus . Thank-you for obeying the no stopping signs, and please drive through again soon ! )


[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-10-2000).]
Justin Nuendo
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41 posted 04-11-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

Doc....follow this mysterious link....I'll be there soon to help ya !
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum31/HTML/003252.html
 
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