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lucky
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-27-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~
My God, this is beautiful.
If she's peeking in ...
I know she will love it.
Thank you for your consideration.
~*Marge*~



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Martie
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2 posted 03-27-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lucky, this is incredible!
Enola
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I agree.  It's wonderful.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 03-28-2000 06:55 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lucky, I hardly know what to say here, but this is a superb piece, with exceptionally beautiful phrases throughout, from beginning to end. It is a joy to read.
Truly exquisite.
Liz
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5 posted 03-28-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

Beautiful.I know she will like this alot. thank you.  
Lucius Cade
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Wow, I forgot to breath while reading that. It never stops, just goes on forever. I have never read anything like that, Great poem.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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Ah, your warm tender poems - your loving poems - ah - darling one, I love all your work, but especially these.  This one is bursting with feeling, and so keenly felt in the depths of my heart.  Thank you.

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Lovely! *S*
hoot_owl_rn
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Very lovely...it's nice to see you posting again and better than ever  
CherylLynnMckee
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Truely lovely..wonderful to read!

 
 
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