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Shelley
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 263
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2000-03-27 06:49 PM


feathered caresses
without hands
sweetened
by lips of flavor...

warmed in oils
of sincerity...

soothing and
enticing...

probing gently
every weakness...

stirring desires
to generous
proportions
seducing movement
without thought

timidness set aside...

abiding only
in the moment.....

... just a whisper.



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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-27 07:12 PM


Shelley, you capture me with the soft, caressing stroke of your pen.  You have redefined a "caress" and it speaks in a whisper.
Beautifully done!

You have my 1K

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
2 posted 2000-03-27 08:43 PM


Absolutely lovely!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2000-03-27 08:48 PM


This is very soft and gentle Shelley, a very nice piece.

Marina

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
4 posted 2000-03-28 11:12 AM


(whispering softly in your ear)
sending this back to the top to stir more desires with your whispered caresses.

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