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Caressing

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Shelley
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0 posted 03-27-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Shelley

feathered caresses
without hands
sweetened
by lips of flavor...

warmed in oils
of sincerity...

soothing and
enticing...

probing gently
every weakness...

stirring desires
to generous
proportions
seducing movement
without thought

timidness set aside...

abiding only
in the moment.....

... just a whisper.


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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-27-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Shelley, you capture me with the soft, caressing stroke of your pen.  You have redefined a "caress" and it speaks in a whisper.
Beautifully done!

You have my 1K

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
Tara Simms
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2 posted 03-27-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Absolutely lovely!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Marina
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3 posted 03-27-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is very soft and gentle Shelley, a very nice piece.

Marina
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 03-28-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

(whispering softly in your ear)
sending this back to the top to stir more desires with your whispered caresses.
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