Member Rara Avis
Martie, I don't feel this verse is good - much too loose and can be greatly improved. Wish I could spend some time with you so you could give me some pointers. But thank you for your comments about the phrases. Much appreciated
hoot, Free verse still is not comfortable. Thanks
Toe, Where have you been? What do you mean, waxy legs. I can't think of anyone else who would come up with that. I could write a book about you. That's the most colorful subject I can think to write about. Glad to see you.
suthern, Toe pops up at the most unexpected moments with the most unpredictable remarks. just write down some of his savory quotes and we'll write a book together. Thanks
Pepper, How is the sweet one today? Thanks for your comments. Love ya
Marge, Thanks. Everything is going great. I will post soon in announcements. Toe is a card. He brightens my day
Nan. Thanks. I think this can be much improved. Iappreciate your comments
Denise. Silence speaks the loudest. Thanks
Sy, A very nice compliment from the master. Thank you Love ya
Mariee, Most can relate. Thanks for your kind remark.
Danny, Is this a play on words? Thanks!
vanana, Thanks you, dear, for commenting
Claire. Wish some of you accomplished poets would give me a class on free verse. I greatly appreciate your remarks
Lovebug, See that?, I ventured into free verse (very nervously). I'm still shaking in my shoes, silently, of course). Thanks, sweetie
Balladeer, I will put down my pen when you do. Thanks
lucky, It's funny you should say this, because I was just thinking the same about yours. What a beautiful verse to Rainbow. Magnificent! I wish I could write like that. Ired it several times. Thanks for reading and commenting