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Open Poetry #6

I cry out in vain...

Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

0 posted 2000-03-27 01:53 AM

I question your God, my heart, and my soul
Existence needs proof, in stories I'm told
But I sit here and cry, lacking gratification
While others have died, soley for their religion

So why do I cry? If I do not beleive
What makes me doubt... I can not conceive
Is it power above? Or in my own heart
where these feelings are born, I know not where to start

Is God just a form of societal ethic?
Or is God a true being, to be viewed as angelic
It is nature to question, but with no answers received
I am still hanging, what can I acheive?

In need of assistance, I cry out in vain
I am a lost child, my doubts will retain
But I fear for my death, for what will remain

please help...I fear I am already slain.

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Lucidity is the answer to all problems

[This message has been edited by Lucius Cade (edited 03-27-2000).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-27 01:54 PM

Very intense poem, Lucius. Well written. I don't believe that anyone cries out in vain, though....the answer will come to those who truly are seeking an answer.

Denise

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

2 posted 2000-03-27 05:15 PM

Thank you. I have been searching for answers for about a year now. and I feel I have gotten no where. Everything in me that tells me there is a God is countered by a scientific fact or common sense in me saying there isnt. Hopefully I will truely find out soon.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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