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eyesplus2
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0 posted 03-27-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2

            
      A golden thread given at birth
         we hold tight to one end
  the other end is given to our soulmate
     sometimes the thread is very long
        twisting and turning
    traveling through dreams and wishes

        sometimes it is very short
    we sometimes miss what is right in front                                 of us
        this thread is very strong
       it is with us for all eternity

    sometimes an eternity is how long it            takes for us to meet our soul mate
    other times we meet and spend an eternity                                                                                                 together
there are times when we meet and can only                                 spend a                                                          heart beat in time together
        a golden thread….laced with tears………





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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-27-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

sometimes it is very short
we sometimes miss
what is right in front of us
this thread is very strong
it is with us for all eternity
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this is really beautiful eyes...
words of wisdom in this gentle kind poem.
very nice,
take care jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
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Enola
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2 posted 03-27-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

I really like this.  Acutally, I love it.  I'd never thought of love that way before.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Lucius Cade
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3 posted 03-27-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Yes that definately is a interesting view on soul mates. I love the poem.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
 
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