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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
A golden thread given at birth we hold tight to one end the other end is given to our soulmate sometimes the thread is very long twisting and turning traveling through dreams and wishes sometimes it is very short we sometimes miss what is right in front of us this thread is very strong it is with us for all eternity sometimes an eternity is how long it takes for us to meet our soul mate other times we meet and spend an eternity together there are times when we meet and can only spend a heart beat in time together a golden thread….laced with tears……… [This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes it is very short we sometimes miss what is right in front of us this thread is very strong it is with us for all eternity ---------------- this is really beautiful eyes... words of wisdom in this gentle kind poem. very nice, take care jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
I really like this. Acutally, I love it. I'd never thought of love that way before. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Yes that definately is a interesting view on soul mates. I love the poem. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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