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Fencing

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 03-26-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

He brandished foil.
I, e'pee.
En Guarde!
Already underway
at the whispher of hello.

I lunge!
He smiled a sweet parry.
Riposte.
He bowed with gallantry.
Startled, I forgot to pose.

I marvel at his artistry--
how easily he disarmed me--
and how I savor still, the loss.
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
VampDude
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1 posted 03-27-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Spectacular poem, serenity! Really intense, I enjoyed it greatly!! And rock on, hun!  

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-27-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

very creative vision of inspiration in this one serenity.., very cool and unique...the last line was on the mark!!
may I say...touche'  LOL  sorry couldnt resist..
thanks for the sweetness in your relpy tonight, you always make me smile.
take care jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

 
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