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~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

0 posted 2000-03-26 11:53 PM


What I thought was found
Was all of a sudden lost,
I rushed love too quickly,
And now I pay the cost

Predicting feelings
Before they happen first,
Can only bring the obvious predictions
Leading to the worst.

Nothing can be gained
I am only a fool in a hole
And silently all I can do
Is pay the painfull toll.

Feeling remorse and regret,
Holding my head
In my hands,
I know the worst is coming yet.

How I long to hear your voice
Or see your smiling face
Theres nothing in this world
That can ever take its place.

Now I know the facts
How what may seem right,
Can only be a phase
Because true love doesnt happen overnight.

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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
1 posted 2000-03-27 07:22 AM


Vixen.....been there, done that....you are not alone....
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-03-27 09:53 AM


Vixen, what you say is very true. You will fins smiles again soon. Here is one for  you now

~ViXeN~
Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
3 posted 2000-03-28 12:14 PM


yeah, sometimes, you learn the hard way, and i think i have learned the hard way one too many times...
having your heart broken is no fun, but everybody goes through it
ESP - thanks for the smile!!!

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-03-28 01:09 AM


getting your heart broken sucks i know it all to well i also like to learn stuff the hard way your not alone. the poem was good
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