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Slug Bug Blues (with my Daddy)

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Michael II
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0 posted 03-26-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Michael II   Email Michael II   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael II

SLUG BUG BLUES
By Mikey & Michael Anderson


Slug bug red,
Smack Dad's head!

Slug bug blue,
That's new - worth two.


Doesn't matter where we go,
We always play slug bug, you know?

Purple one's, pink one's, greens and tans,
Convertibles and Slug bug vans...


Playing Slug Bug with Dad's the worst,
He always says he saw them first!

I swear that little Mikey cheats!
He calls them after I pass the streets...


Punch the arm, smack the chin,
Dad's just mad cause I always win.

Mikey, my son, what can I say,
You know you just got lucky today!


Daddy, what the heck do you call that?




© Copyright 2000 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 03-26-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Looks like a SLUG BUG Rainbow to me!!!

Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 03-26-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Michael 1&2, It does not get any better than this, you guys are a class act, I'm sending you to hollywood this is great, gee I forgot you could probably walk there...LOL
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3 posted 03-26-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I think it's a slug bug cadillac!

Awww...this is just incredibly sweet...
thank you for the warm heart tonight!
Alwye
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4 posted 03-26-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

This is great you two!  So cute!  I fully expect to see father-son epics pretty soon here!    

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


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5 posted 03-26-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

The only Michael poet I like more than one
is Michael II, cause he's so fun
and what's with this car of many hues
bet there's only one, couldn't come in twos!

You both did a great job. Dad, if you keep this up, you could be as good as Mikey!  
devina
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6 posted 03-26-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Definantly like father like son...!!!

*You two are adorable together!!!* This was just the thing I needed to hear tonight...thanks lil sweetie...and big sweetie!!!

Love ~D



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

WhtDove
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7 posted 03-26-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL, this was just too cute! I'm glad to see ya posting again Mikey! With your Dad at that. Great poem and the picture just made a grand slam. This was great, thanks for the smile you two!
bobbycat
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8 posted 03-26-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

I'll have to agree with White Dove on this one....I was grinning for ear to ear as I read, and the picture at the end made me laugh outloud!!!  My brother and I used to play that game so much our arms would be black and blue!  Thanks for the great poem!    

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 03-26-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Michael and Michael II~
Sounds like a great title for future ventures in fun.
This was WONDERFUL !
~*Marge*~


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PhaerieChild
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10 posted 03-27-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Mikey, this is wonderful!!! I still play slug bug with my son and he's 18. My arm gets awful sore these days though cuz he got so much stronger thru the years. Thanks for the smiles guys.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Nicole
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11 posted 03-27-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Oh now see?!!     This is wonderful!!

Michael, my friend, Mikey always wins cause he's still young and spry...    (Hmm..same reason my girl always wins lol)

Keep it up guys!



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

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Mistikman
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12 posted 03-27-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

LOL, excellent work both of you, wonderful to see a father and his son working together on something  
JamesMichael
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13 posted 03-27-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Hey this is really cool..nice writing..both of you...I've been trying to stir up my three sons interest in writing..still hoping.  James
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14 posted 03-27-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is cute you two  
Pepper
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So good to see you again Mikey  
This piece brought many smiles ...
Great job !!!!

                   
Michael
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16 posted 03-28-2000 03:35 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Mikey - you are truly the Slug Bug Champion of the universe...  Love ya son, thanks for letting me be part of your poem.


Daddy
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17 posted 03-28-2000 04:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey guys, this is soooo cute, thanks for the smiles      

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Butterflies_dont_cry
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18 posted 03-28-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

How refreshing!!!!!!!!!!!  You two gave me a reminder that love and fun can be shared no matter what....and I would call that car a reason for slug bug *hugs*  
Denise
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19 posted 03-28-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so cute, you guys! Sounds like fun!!

Denise
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Mikey & Micheal
this is so cute.you
two make the
perfect duo
  
~Angie





CherylLynnMckee
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21 posted 03-28-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

I really loved it...I still have a big smile on my face..thank-you

 
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22 posted 03-28-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Mikey & Michael: I enjoyed this immensely! *S*
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23 posted 03-28-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I am in love with the Bug and this poem just made my day! Good job!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I am in love with the Bug and this poem just made my day! Good job!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
 
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