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~Winds Of Change~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 03-26-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

~Winds Of Change~

Poetic winds blow ... now sweetly swept away,
carry me to the place in you ... so that I might stay.
Safe passage to your harbors ... sail across your seas,
breath in all your pleasures ... set my spirit free.

Poetic winds blow ... gentle breezes take my will,
carry me to the place in you ... where time stands still.
Take me so far away ... to discover your beaches of sand,
under your starry skies ... I rise up ... heart in my hand.

Poetic winds blow ... quietly taken into the night,
carry me to the place in you ... warmed by desires light.
Bathe me in your mystical waters ... sun dry me on your shore,
caress me with your winds of change ... allow my heart to soar.

Poetic winds blow ... lift me up, now Heaven bound,
carry me to the place in you ... where contentment is found.
Fly with me in twilight skies ... painted in hues by the setting sun,
as we fly free towards the rising moon ... two souls become one.


Janet Marie




 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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lucky
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1 posted 03-26-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Janet,

Like the break-up style. It reminds me of some things I did years ago. Nice for a change. I'll have to check my archives. Thanks for your "re" on beseeched.

 
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 03-26-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Janet Marie,
I must say I just love the way you broke the lines....wonderful!!!  It is as if the winds are blowing your words on the screen.  I can feel the poetic winds blowing right now.  This is beautiful!!  Gives me hope of finding the same.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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3 posted 03-26-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Janet. . .

This is wonderful. . . I read this poem three times. . . once across, once just reading the words on the left and the third time just reading the words on the right. . .

I don't know if you meant this poem to be that way. . . but I saw it right away. . . and think that it's wonderful. . .

Your inspiration definitely shows in this one. . . lucky person he!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Exceptional, Janet Marie, so peaceful and endearing...I LIKE this mood in you!love to you.
Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 03-26-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I could't help but read this several times
Beautiful

Rex}>{{{{o>
JamesMichael
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6 posted 03-27-2000 02:33 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I have felt the same as if writing poetry would "set my spirit free" and "allow my heart to soar."  Writing helps me to feel my feelings and declare the things my heart wants to share.   James
tracie66
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~Breathtakingly Beautiful~



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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8 posted 03-27-2000 06:35 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

J.M.
Such style and class,

Fly with me in twilight skies ... painted in hues by the setting sun,
as we fly free towards the rising moon ... two souls become one.

and most of beauty.  Such beautiful poetry my friend.
**AWHs**


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G. Finley

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9 posted 03-27-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Janet Marie~
This is exceptional quality work.
I am captivated with the
poems-within-the-poem.

Left to right
Left side - Right side
Every two lines 1-2, 1-2, 1-2, 1-2
and then 3-4,3-4,3-4,3-4
even did it from the bottom up
using the reverse two line scheme.

Whoa !  Refreshingly different !
~*Marge*~


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Enola
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Wow.  Yet again I am blown over by your fantastic work, so much so, I can't think of anything else to say.  Thanks for being so brilliant!

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 03-27-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I would have to say this is my favorite of the work I have seen of yours. Nicely written, you should be proud  
TerryW
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12 posted 03-27-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Janet,
   Wow!  I must say, you have taken my breath away, then given it back in a completely different way.  Instead of breathing just "air"  I can feel the "poetic winds" around me now!   Exceptional job!    
     Terry


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This is a work of art ...
Janet .... exceptional and oh, so beautiful ...
Love this piece  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon





Marina
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14 posted 03-27-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

JM, great work as always. I would certainly have to agree with all the above comments.

Marina
Janet Marie
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15 posted 03-28-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

My most sincere thank you to ALL for your encouragement of this poem...I grow and learn from you.
I am deeply touched by the emotions this one evoked. I most of all appreciate you taking the time to read it.

serenity...right back at you sweets  

Sven and Margie...you guys make me smile... I wish I could tell you I was such a poet that I set out to do that "3 way pattern"...but it just came as a gift of the moment of inspiration...thank you for giving me so much poetic credit...I hope to earn it in time  (smile)

THANK YOU ALL WHO READ AND REPLIED.

to my partner in rhyme...thank you for sweet inspiration...I am most grateful...
and content (smile)
take care, janet marie

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Danny Holloway
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Simply Beautiful.  Love the way this is set up.  Agree with Sven, reads so well anyway you look at it.  Even turned it upside down and was just as good (smiling)
JM, this is super!!!!!
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 03-28-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Janet,
I am impressed and this is one of your best.
*L* Sy
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18 posted 01-23-2005 09:34 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I love this style you do when you do it, if that makes sense. I have saved this one, and don't mind me - just dusting shelves down here and saving a few keepers.  

Carpe' Diem

Dark Angel
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19 posted 01-23-2005 11:01 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I see three beautiful poems in this one JM, I am sorry I missed it then.

Beautiful work as usual

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

 
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