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Seymour Tabin
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              Another I

One day I walked the ancient shore,
Crunching shells on an ancient floor.
While waters of an ancient sea,
Immersed the very soul of me.

My mind was in the clouds on high,
My thoughts like distant birds that fly.
My body warmed the suns warm rays,
It felt to me the best of days.

This stroll, this dreamy fantasy,
This touch of whimsies ecstasy,
Gave birth a gentle plea of charm,
That suit the day and sloth of calm.

May the ancient sea and ancient sky,
Give birth the day I die, another I.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 03-26-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Wow, Seymour, very beautiful. I liked the image of the sea.

Elizabeth


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2 posted 03-26-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Seymour~
To be reborn on the waves of the sea
or in the starry sky ...
what lovely thoughts.
Loves ya'
~*Marge*~


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Seymour Tabin
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Elizabeth,
Thank you for the big WOW. Enjoyed the comment.

Marge,
You are a love, Thank you for the beautiful answer, *L*
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4 posted 03-26-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Indeed, Terrible be the day the world is deprived of one with such poetic skill   Well done Seymour.
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Seymour,
Wonderful work!!!  I love the reference to the sea.  It is true that we are all reborn the day we die.  What a lovely way to put it!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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6 posted 03-26-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sy. this is PERFECT!!!!!!
i love this poems meanings and emotions...
very well written and expressed with the imagery!!!
very nice, take care, jm

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Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
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We'll all then breathe... another "Sigh"....
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This is so lovely, Sy!

Denise
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Mistikman, Thank you for the wonderful comment.

Lone Wolf, A very nice comment, thank you.

Janet, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. *L*

Nan, Clever and sweet. *L*

Denise, Thank you for the lovely. *L*
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Seymour,

me thinks you have been exploring new territories!  And I like what I see!

Corinne
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In this piece, we shall never lose you, and you will live forever.
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What a lovely thought, Sy...no wonder, I like the sea...and you!
Seymour Tabin
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Corinne, Sunshine, Martie,
Just wanted to thank you all before this poem falls into the abyss. *L* you all
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 03-28-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
How did I ever miss this? Guess I haven't been spending as much time at the computer and this must have slipped by me.
This is a beautiful poem, so imaginative with lovely thoughts. It's classic You
Love ya
Liz
 
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