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To Love |
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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
TO love is not being able to hide anymore everythinng changes value everything reminds me of you To love is making the moon the light of your eyes The light that lay on me Silver that fell on the sea Breathing deep without notecing Breathing the air that is you Wake up smiling Have the whole day to see you Love is a twister, that is born on our hearts without permission to get in storm of wishes An eclipse on the end of a kiss Love is seasons, its winter its summer It is like the sun that warms and takes our fears away of taking risks, giving yourself To love is to get old wanting to hold you Play on the guitar the song to make you fall asleep |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
BrazilianGirl, Welcome to Passions! A lovely first posting (no pun intended). Ah yes, the best poetry comes from the heart, having been lived... Keep up the good work! INclan |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely words...a wonderful light to see love in... Welcome to Passions!   K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrazilianGirl~ A lovely entrance to our family of friends. These are beautiful lines with lovely thoughts. 'To love is to get old wanting to hold you Play on the guitar the song to make you fall asleep'  Welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
This is a very pretty heartfelt poem, thank you for sharing it. David2 |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Nice first poem! ... Makes me reminesce about those special memories... "An eclipse on the end of a kiss". Welcome! |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A very nice entree, indeed, Brazilian Girl.. Welcome to Passions - Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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