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To Love

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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 03-26-2000 06:25 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl


TO love is not being able to hide anymore
everythinng changes value
everything reminds me of you

To love is making the moon the light of your eyes
The light that lay on me
Silver that fell on the sea

Breathing deep without notecing
Breathing the air that is you
Wake up smiling
Have the whole day to see you

Love is a twister, that is born on our hearts
without permission to get in
storm of wishes
An eclipse on the end of a kiss

Love is seasons, its winter its summer
It is like the sun
that warms and takes our fears away
of taking risks, giving yourself

To love is to get old wanting to hold you
Play  on the guitar
the song to make you fall asleep


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INclan
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1 posted 03-26-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

BrazilianGirl,

Welcome to Passions!  A lovely first posting (no pun intended). Ah yes, the best poetry comes from the heart, having been lived...

Keep up the good work!

INclan
Severn
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Lovely words...a wonderful light to see love in...

Welcome to Passions!

    

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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BrazilianGirl~
A lovely entrance to our family of friends.
These are beautiful lines with lovely thoughts.

'To love is to get old wanting to hold you
Play on the guitar
the song to make you fall asleep'

    
Welcome to Passions.
~*Marge*~


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David2
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4 posted 03-26-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

This is a very pretty heartfelt poem, thank you for sharing it.
     David2
Panthers Chrysalis
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5 posted 03-26-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Panthers Chrysalis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Panthers Chrysalis

Nice first poem! ...

Makes me reminesce about those special memories...  "An eclipse on the end of a kiss".  Welcome!
Nan
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A very nice entree, indeed, Brazilian Girl.. Welcome to Passions - Check your email for a special greeting..
 
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