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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-26-2000 06:21 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel



I dedicate this heart
  of crimson
now blue
with words that
   echo unspoken
you
listen if not of
  my selfish
heart

but of
  your selfish
self

a dreamy
    wonderland
flushed and gone,
  drowned by
    stubborn souls
submerged into
nothingness

Of worthlessness
  zip-zero
and naught

this will become
      of my love
and eventually
my heart

I dedicate this
to you.


Dark Angel
2000


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 03-26-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well you already know how lovely I think this is...

Wonderful A of L...

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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2 posted 03-26-2000 07:55 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Like the wings of an eagle - swift, strong and beautiful. Well done.

Moonshine.

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hoot_owl_rn
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This is lovely DA  
Poet deVine
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4 posted 03-26-2000 08:20 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah....lately your work has such a meloncholy tone which makes it seem like it would shatter if someone touched it..lovely, DA.  
Denise
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5 posted 03-26-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very melancholy yet very beautiful!   HUGS

Denise
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6 posted 03-26-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

DA,
Lovely and beautifully put!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Dark Angel
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7 posted 03-26-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sweet Butterfly, Moonshine,Ruth, Sharon Denise and Lone Wolf.....

I'd like to thank you all for taking the time to read this, I do appreciate it   and Thank you so very much for your lovely replies.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Heart of glass, FRAGILE, handle with care  
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