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If I die, I wonder

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Jenna Barkley
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0 posted 03-25-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Jenna Barkley   Email Jenna Barkley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenna Barkley

I have this life I cannot live, I might as well just die,
But if I die, I'll have to know if I go up, or down, or fly.
If I don't die, I'll have to think of what just might occur,
And if I die, I just might go right down to Lucifer.
If I don't die, I wonder if I can look back on what life seems,
If I don't die, I wonder if I'll meet the man of my dreams.
If I don't die, I wonder if I'll have many baby bottles,
If I don't die, I wonder id I'll be a super model.
If I die, I wonder if I'll just be with the thunder,
There is no reason just to die, cause then I cannot wonder.
© Copyright 2000 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
Lucius Cade
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1 posted 03-26-2000 04:03 AM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Great poem. Wonder is what keeps mankind evolving. I liked the style of rhyme too.

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David2
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2 posted 03-26-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

There is no reason just to die, cause then I cannot wonder.

I really loved this line.
   David2
JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-28-2000 08:00 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very interesting..so don't die Jenna cause it looks like you have lots of wonderful events waiting for your pleasure...and I'm sure many new poems waiting for your thoughts to be revealed.   James
 
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