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Rain (a haiku)

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Joannak
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0 posted 03-25-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Joannak


Rain, softly falling
Memories, passions alive
Thinking of you now.

In the dark of morn
Dripping music from the trees
I whisper your name.

Knowing you are near,
Listening to the rain song
Do you think of me?

jk
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-26-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Joanna~
This is flawlessly lovely.
Tying the three into the poem
works beautifully for me.
I like !  
~*Marge*~


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INclan
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2 posted 03-26-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Joannak,

I am speachless. My work pales by comparison. Teach me....I beg you!

INclan
Denise
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Simply beautiful, Joannak!  

Denise
JamesMichael
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"Thinking of your now...I whisper your name..Do you think of me?"  Yes..I do.  Very romantic writing.    James
mariee66
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5 posted 03-26-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Wow~
This is oozing with emotion~
I LOVE IT! ~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


Joannak
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6 posted 03-26-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joannak

Thank you all for your comments.

Marge, I admire your writing so much, it honors me to have you read my work.

INclan, I have no teaching credentials, but maybe we could collaborate sometime?

Thank you, Denise.  I love your work as well, and look forward to reading more.

James, I had a romantic inspiration for this piece, I hope he will read and know it is for him...

Marie, thanks for the comments, I do have a very emotional tie with this person, he brings out the best in me.

Joanna
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Very lovely and very well done  
 
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