Thank you all for your comments.
Marge, I admire your writing so much, it honors me to have you read my work.
INclan, I have no teaching credentials, but maybe we could collaborate sometime?
Thank you, Denise. I love your work as well, and look forward to reading more.
James, I had a romantic inspiration for this piece, I hope he will read and know it is for him...
Marie, thanks for the comments, I do have a very emotional tie with this person, he brings out the best in me.