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~ Welcome Night~
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~ Welcome Night~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I long for the night and welcome sleep prefer darkness to light for then I no longer weep. Dreading the morn and its long day ahead wishing I wasn't born wishing I was dead. Try to make it through each cold and windy day without thinking of you, I just can't keep you away. So I fight with my feelings and my confused head as I remember the words that we not long ago said. But time will never erase the love I hold for you forever in my heart's embrace always cherished always true. Now I lay me down to sleep oh, how I welcome the night for I'll no longer weep, when I turn off the light. Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
Every night I think like this. Thank you for looking into the window of my heart and putting it so very eloquently. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I wish I knew the secret of turning off the tears at night...very heart felt poem, Dark Angel, and well done. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
 Angel this brought tears to my eyes. I could just weep with you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This one tugs at my heartstrings. I send a *HUG* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
They say a good poem stirs strong emotions. This is a good poem. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
(((((((hugebighuggs))))))) I wish that you didn't have to go through what you're going through - I wish I could take it away somehow, make it easier....... You probably already know what I'm gonna say, but I'll say it again - I'm here for you, whenever you need me, I'll help shelter you from the storm as best I can, always. Moonshine. *-*-*-*-*-*-*- |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
It is so often difficult to still the tears that take one through to the ending of light...with sleep, if only in dreams, one can hope for reprieve. Your poem describes so creatively how this feels. Wonderfully written. ~ Claire |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I know the depth of your loss hon...and you have again, written it beautifully. You know, that you keep on smiling is really wonderful to see -  Proud of you.K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is cool dark angel...I remember when my first wife left me and took my three boys and I would have to watch TBN half the night to put my mind at ease so I could go to sleep and the pain was so intense that I would always pray to God that I wouldn't wake up in the morning...to a fresh dose of pain. James |
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