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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Her As I look into your eyes, I see things in my mind, I picture you and me, And what we’ve left behind A sweet trail of memories, All good and nothing bad, I love you babe, with all my heart, Yet I sit here feeling sad I want to feel you at my side, I want to touch your face, I want to kiss your gorgeous lips, And you, I must embrace You dwell so very far from me, It hurts my beating heart, But even if a world away, We’ll never be apart I’m going to feel you at my side, I’m going to touch your face, I’m going to kiss your gorgeous lips, And you, I will embrace So please hold on and wait for me, I won’t be far for long, I love you babe, with all my soul, And the sadness will soon be gone. "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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nightloy New Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 8 |
Love is a wonderful thing. Good poem!! I love the rhyming scheme. ~nightloy visit my website www.geocities.com/nightloy please submit your poetry |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Thank you nightloy, and yes I will visit your site. "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is really sweet...keep waiting and dreaming and time will move on by... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Vampdude! Cor |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Touched my heart, VampDude! And that Metallica quote is a favorite of mine too! Thank you...Vamp and rock on m'friend! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A heartfelt poem expressed well  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very touching..you're the Vampman. James |
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