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VampDude
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0 posted 03-25-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Her

As I look into your eyes,
I see things in my mind,
I picture you and me,
And what weve left behind

A sweet trail of memories,
All good and nothing bad,
I love you babe, with all my heart,
Yet I sit here feeling sad

I want to feel you at my side,
I want to touch your face,
I want to kiss your gorgeous lips,
And you, I must embrace

You dwell so very far from me,
It hurts my beating heart,
But even if a world away,
Well never be apart

Im going to feel you at my side,
Im going to touch your face,
Im going to kiss your gorgeous lips,
And you, I will embrace

So please hold on and wait for me,
I wont be far for long,
I love you babe, with all my soul,
And the sadness will soon be gone.


 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-
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nightloy
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1 posted 03-25-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for nightloy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nightloy

Love is a wonderful thing. Good poem!!
I love the rhyming scheme.

                  ~nightloy
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VampDude
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2 posted 03-26-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Thank you nightloy, and yes I will visit your site.

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

devina
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3 posted 03-26-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is really sweet...keep waiting and dreaming and time will move on by...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Corinne
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4 posted 03-26-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely, Vampdude!

Cor
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5 posted 03-27-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Touched my heart, VampDude!  And that Metallica quote is a favorite of mine too!
Thank you...Vamp and rock on m'friend!
hoot_owl_rn
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A heartfelt poem expressed well  
JamesMichael
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7 posted 03-27-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very touching..you're the Vampman.  James
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