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Midnight Blue (don't be afraid to read me i'm a serious wayoutwalt poem)

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wayoutwalt
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The horizon embraced a lone tinge of midnight blue
Suspended in my lungs the last breath I held for you
You came to me in vision when the heat was all too much
I missed your very presence until I lost your touch

Now my heart hangs heavy-laden in the western sky
My sight is never ending the many passers by
None wear the rose in their hair plucked as my love has been
Placed in the midnight sky to inspire poetic men

No one looks except a few who hold their pad and pen
No one dares or even cares to see the heart of men
So how will I a cursed wretch find you in the throng
Will you be the one, rose in hair, singing loverís song





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-25-2000).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-25-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Walt! First you write about PMS, then you sneak in her with this wonderful poem! This is one of your best sir! Absolutely magnificent!!!  
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 03-25-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

This is so true, people neglect the hearts of men and expect them to be "manly" and hide thier feelings and keep a straght face all the time and speak in low boring tones of foolish striving for masculine perfection.
WhtDove
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3 posted 03-25-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Walt you can do anything! Magnificent it is!
I always say a real man shows his emotions. After all they're God given!
Jenna Barkley
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4 posted 03-25-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Jenna Barkley   Email Jenna Barkley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenna Barkley

Walt-Wonderfully said my friend! This just goes to show what talent one has. I say this as I am printing this amazing poem out! I am very impressed!
~Jen
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5 posted 03-25-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I saw a poetic masterpiece
written by a man named Walt
the ink flowed from his pen
as the words danced around
and formed a waltz of a poem

Excellent job Walt, I love it.
wayoutwalt
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6 posted 03-25-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

thank yuh all hehehe waltz waltz waltz losty....yuh i wrote this with a PILOT G-2 .07 fine ball point ink and a very fine ink it was yuh...
Nan
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7 posted 03-26-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sometimes I think we should redub thee.... You can still be wow though.. How about... wiseolewalt?
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8 posted 03-26-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I am not afraid to read it--and I found it to be pretty good!

Elizabeth


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Mistikman
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9 posted 03-26-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

heh, excellent work there walt  
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10 posted 03-26-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I see in the heart of men...yours, beautiful, spreading these words through here from your serious side. I like this very much.
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11 posted 03-26-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Walt!  

Denise
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whew thanx the rest o yuh for replyin yuh are all so kind
devina
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13 posted 03-26-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was good Walt...bought time you gave up writing about pms- this seems to fit you much better!! (and you don't get smacked so much I'm sure)

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Michael
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14 posted 03-26-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

They usually find you when you stop looking for them I think, Walt.  Even then, they're a bear to hold on to.  This was beautiful, Walt.

Personally -  I love your P.M.S.stuff too, though ...LOL


Michael

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wayoutwalt
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hehehe thanx mike and devina i'll keep writin the sillies as long as somebody likes em yuhuyuyuy
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Walt..I like your silly side as it makes me smile...but boy, you certainly shine when you cut to the chase with these serious ones  
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