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Tender Render ... My Heart-felt Tribute To Passionate Poets

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Marge Tindal
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Tender Render
~*Marge Tindal*~

The tender render from your pen
picked me up and took me in
clamoring the recesses of your mind
that I could only hope to find

Within your quill
I feel the thrill
of life colored with your ink
Take me on to life beyond
living on your brink

Drop me on the shoreline
of your castle's built so fine
Let me feel the ocean's roar
tide surging from you forevermore

Lift me to the mountain crest
view sunlight setting in the West
Melting snow on covered hills
unfurl now the daffodils

Spreading chestnut branches wide
shading all you feel inside
Rest with me in hammock made
between the branches of her shade

To the rill of valleys wide
babbling brook of your inside
Enjoin me in the searching foray
of knowing just what you will say

Etched with ink upon my heart
scenes you've stroked will not depart
You have writ upon my soul
tender render of your unfold

Share with me your joy so tender
painted with your indelible render





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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Marge, this is wonderful...I've got to say my favorite of all you have written...such sweet thought and extremely well done!!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-25-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

So true Marge...many times even when I am not posting I Love to read the poems here and when I find a special one or two to connect with it is the finest blessing.  James
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Marge,
   I always enjoy your work and this is no exception. Fine poetry.
    David2
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 03-25-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Martie~
You know your name is forever inscribed in the Tender Render Registry.  

James~
To read the works of others is my daily treat.  Glad to know others feel the same.

David2~
Thank you.  
Just flipping through some pages of passionate poetry makes me thankful that I am here among such creatures of habit and talent.  The places I've visited throughts their thoughts is joy beyond compare.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 03-25-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge
I don't know how you do it, but I wish I had a touch of you. This is fabulous  
LoL
tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
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The render of your special pen
gives honor both to men & women.
Your castles bright and full of much love
kissing us with sunshine from skies above.
Upon your tidal waves we surf your precious words
and hear your rhymes sing to us like some chirping birds.
you walk us down your sandy shoreline with confidence and strength
as each sand speck is a moment of beauty  in your life written for us in length.


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-25-2000).]
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Ah, a lovely tribute...this is truly a wonderful place..thank you for helping make it so...  
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Tracie~
Sweetheart, you all have the 'perfect touch' of poetry from the heart.  Thank you.

LostDreamer~
Thank you, dear friend.  Responses like the beauty that you penned, inspire me and fill my heart and pen.

PoetdeVine~
Yes, it is so.  You ALL are very special.
It is MY pleasure to be among such a caring and talented group of poets.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Spoken from the heart
Written with indelible ink
So special to us
Thank you, Marge
It's beautiful
Liz
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She makes us cry with heart felt pasts,
While laughter makes our hearts all dance.
Brightening a cloud filled day,
While tears ofpain show us the way.

To this and thine we all find true,
A poet just as good as you.

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Marge, you always write



from your heart.


You're such a special person,
such a gifted poet.

Claire
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12 posted 03-25-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth, my friend~
Thank you, love.  
'Tis all of you who make it so easy to love this place.

WindRider~
Such a sweet reply of from your pen.
Thank you from the heart of me.

Claire~
How very pretty your reply ...
brings a tear of joy
to this lady's eye.
And a smile to my heart.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wonderful Marge! So glad you could be with us to spread all the joy  
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from Margie-girls pen...to our heart...
as always you are the bright spot in the room.
perfect poem Marge.This place is special.So are you.
take care, jm


                      
                      

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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WhiteDove~
Oh, if I only leave a little joy,
it could never equal the joy I receive.
Thank you, friend.

Janet Marie~
Such applause is surely shared
with all who reside here.
Thank you, sweet lady.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Stunning and so beautiful, Marge.  Your words are such a wonderful gift to us all.

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


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Marge....I see your heart and it is beautiful!!!  I loved this one!!!  What a sweet tribute.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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Beautiful Marge... I have always felt welcomed here since I first joined. . . and have always been amazed by the depth of emotion felt and shared by everyone here. . .

Thank you. . . and you're welcome. . .

------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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rendered beautifully, Marge!

Corinne

hey, I was lookin' for a tunnel in that there poem!  LOL
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Alwye~
Thank you.  Hopefully it matches the beauty of the lasting friendships found here.

LoneWolf~
Yeah, my heart is always hanging out there waiting to be touched ... and all of you do just that.  Thank you.

Sven~
Isn't that just what 'home' is all about.
Sharing and caring ... our words ... our hearts.

Corinne~
Okay, girl .... just for you.  

Found within the tunnel ride
the raging waters of subside.
Life raft of your storm is worn,
riding on words of poet borne.

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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21 posted 03-26-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

There are new people I will know.
I know this to be true
But they will never spark the glow
I get from knowing you.

There are new pathways I will tread
Not knowing where they lead
And I may profit or, instead,
May fail to succeed.

But there's one thing I know for sure
That when I reach the end
There's nothing that I can't endure
Because you are my friend.

Your words are like my greatest friends
That lift me when I'm down.
So many times my smile depends
On whether you're around.

You thank us all for being here?
Marge, you must be unsound!
The heart don't thank the skeleton
For hauling it around.

You are the heart and spirit of
The beauty that you see.
You fill our minds with hope and love
And calm serenity.

I know my world has been enriched
Each time that you appear
And, though it's just a little niche,
Thanks, Marge, for being here  
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22 posted 03-26-2000 01:29 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, sweet, sweet Balladeer~

Now you made this little heart cry.
You have to know
that I love your friendship so much.  

You've been more than a friend.

The challenge of inspiration
to this heart of poetry.
More than anyone else
you've inspired the best from me.
You've encourage me to 'reach in'
and in doing so ... reach out,
so others can begin to see
what this lady is about.
For all the love you've shared
written on my heart,
thank you, my personal 'skeleton'
for hauling around my heart.
Love you
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Oh, Marge, this is so beautiful and so very special and so are you! Thank you.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Marge(y) - you are one of my special lights here...you really are. You have a kind word for all and a special of writing words that sound so genuine and loving.

I'm so glad you came here.

And of course this is a lovely poem.

Loves ya I do!
Kamla  


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