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Tender Render ... My Heart-felt Tribute To Passionate Poets
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Tender Render ... My Heart-felt Tribute To Passionate Poets |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tender Render ~*Marge Tindal*~  The tender render from your pen picked me up and took me in clamoring the recesses of your mind that I could only hope to find Within your quill I feel the thrill of life colored with your ink Take me on to life beyond living on your brink Drop me on the shoreline of your castle's built so fine Let me feel the ocean's roar tide surging from you forevermore Lift me to the mountain crest view sunlight setting in the West Melting snow on covered hills unfurl now the daffodils Spreading chestnut branches wide shading all you feel inside Rest with me in hammock made between the branches of her shade To the rill of valleys wide babbling brook of your inside Enjoin me in the searching foray of knowing just what you will say Etched with ink upon my heart scenes you've stroked will not depart You have writ upon my soul tender render of your unfold Share with me your joy so tender painted with your indelible render ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, this is wonderful...I've got to say my favorite of all you have written...such sweet thought and extremely well done!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So true Marge...many times even when I am not posting I Love to read the poems here and when I find a special one or two to connect with it is the finest blessing. James |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Marge, I always enjoy your work and this is no exception. Fine poetry. David2  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ You know your name is forever inscribed in the Tender Render Registry. James~ To read the works of others is my daily treat. Glad to know others feel the same. David2~ Thank you. Just flipping through some pages of passionate poetry makes me thankful that I am here among such creatures of habit and talent. The places I've visited throughts their thoughts is joy beyond compare. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge I don't know how you do it, but I wish I had a touch of you. This is fabulous LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
The render of your special pen gives honor both to men & women. Your castles bright and full of much love kissing us with sunshine from skies above. Upon your tidal waves we surf your precious words and hear your rhymes sing to us like some chirping birds. you walk us down your sandy shoreline with confidence and strength as each sand speck is a moment of beauty in your life written for us in length. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-25-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah, a lovely tribute...this is truly a wonderful place..thank you for helping make it so...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Sweetheart, you all have the 'perfect touch' of poetry from the heart. Thank you. LostDreamer~ Thank you, dear friend. Responses like the beauty that you penned, inspire me and fill my heart and pen. PoetdeVine~ Yes, it is so. You ALL are very special. It is MY pleasure to be among such a caring and talented group of poets. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Spoken from the heart Written with indelible ink So special to us Thank you, Marge It's beautiful Liz |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
She makes us cry with heart felt pasts, While laughter makes our hearts all dance. Brightening a cloud filled day, While tears ofpain show us the way. To this and thine we all find true, A poet just as good as you. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, you always write  from your heart. You're such a special person, such a gifted poet. Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ Thank you, love. 'Tis all of you who make it so easy to love this place. WindRider~ Such a sweet reply of from your pen. Thank you from the heart of me. Claire~ How very pretty your reply ... brings a tear of joy to this lady's eye. And a smile to my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wonderful Marge! So glad you could be with us to spread all the joy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 from Margie-girls pen...to our heart... as always you are the bright spot in the room. perfect poem Marge.This place is special.So are you.  take care, jm  Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Oh, if I only leave a little joy, it could never equal the joy I receive. Thank you, friend. Janet Marie~ Such applause is surely shared with all who reside here. Thank you, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Stunning and so beautiful, Marge. Your words are such a wonderful gift to us all. *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge....I see your heart and it is beautiful!!! I loved this one!!! What a sweet tribute. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Marge... I have always felt welcomed here since I first joined. . . and have always been amazed by the depth of emotion felt and shared by everyone here. . . Thank you. . . and you're welcome. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
rendered beautifully, Marge! Corinne hey, I was lookin' for a tunnel in that there poem! LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alwye~ Thank you. Hopefully it matches the beauty of the lasting friendships found here. LoneWolf~ Yeah, my heart is always hanging out there waiting to be touched ... and all of you do just that. Thank you. Sven~ Isn't that just what 'home' is all about. Sharing and caring ... our words ... our hearts. Corinne~ Okay, girl .... just for you.  Found within the tunnel ride the raging waters of subside. Life raft of your storm is worn, riding on words of poet borne. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are new people I will know. I know this to be true But they will never spark the glow I get from knowing you. There are new pathways I will tread Not knowing where they lead And I may profit or, instead, May fail to succeed. But there's one thing I know for sure That when I reach the end There's nothing that I can't endure Because you are my friend. Your words are like my greatest friends That lift me when I'm down. So many times my smile depends On whether you're around. You thank us all for being here? Marge, you must be unsound! The heart don't thank the skeleton For hauling it around. You are the heart and spirit of The beauty that you see. You fill our minds with hope and love And calm serenity. I know my world has been enriched Each time that you appear And, though it's just a little niche, Thanks, Marge, for being here |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, sweet, sweet Balladeer~ Now you made this little heart cry. You have to know that I love your friendship so much. You've been more than a friend. The challenge of inspiration to this heart of poetry. More than anyone else you've inspired the best from me. You've encourage me to 'reach in' and in doing so ... reach out, so others can begin to see what this lady is about. For all the love you've shared written on my heart, thank you, my personal 'skeleton' for hauling around my heart. Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, Marge, this is so beautiful and so very special and so are you! Thank you. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) - you are one of my special lights here...you really are. You have a kind word for all and a special of writing words that sound so genuine and loving. I'm so glad you came here. And of course this is a lovely poem. Loves ya I do! Kamla |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*devina sneaks in just a tad bit late!!* Loved your Easter colors Marge...this was touching, to say the very least...G* Hope you never run out of love hun, then where would we all be huh??? he he Love you, Devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Thank you for finding it so. All of you are special to my heart. Kammie~ Oh, little butterfly ... you fluttered into this lady's heart. Feels like I could just reach out and HUG you ! Thank you, love. Love ya' Devina~ Never too late for this lady's heart. Love to you. Glad you liked the colors. The inspirations here are wonderful, are they not? Thank you, girl. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A wonderful tribute marge - and I love the graphic too. Michael |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marge - You're the Tender Render Mender Sender of all time... |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I can tell just by reading the responses that everyone loved your poem and are glad that you are here, Marge! Of course I feel the same way. Wonderful work as always. Elizabeth< !signature--> "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderful, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Thank you my very talented friend. Nan~ You make my heart smile ...and then it jumps on my face ! Elizabeth~ My heart-felt thanks to all. I am thrilled to be here. Suthern~ Where you been gal?HUGS ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Marge you are a saint Pure and simple and amazing monique |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful this is Marge-thank you so much *wiping lone tear* |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Excellent work Marge, just exquisite |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Monique~ I appreciate your applause, but let me set the record straight .. I don't wear a halo cause a 'saint' I ain't ! More like a 'little devil' when the mood strikes me right I'll settle for the fact that you simply like ! PassingShadows~ Great big HUGS and a tissue. Now don't go get me blubbering. Thank you, dear. Mistik~ Oh, thank you so much for that. I just LOVE you ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Marge- Although I am a "newbie" on these pages, it didn't take me long to see how special you make each and everyone of these poets feel. I can see that you are their inspiration....the beacon of their hope. I also know- you were the first to welcome me... so sweet... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful Marge! Just lovely! Denise |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge, Every time I read your work I see that you outdo yourself even more. I love to read your poems, because they can let my mind dance across the winds of imagination, soaring freely through the soft colors of your words. Terry |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very well said Marge!!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Well Marge, I'm going to echo all before me .... You are truly a special lady .... and an amazing poetess ....... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Panthers~ Friends don't get to stay 'newbies' for long at this place. Wait until you feel the inspiration they all spread. Denise~ Thank you, Ms. Welcome Mat of the site. TerryW~ I appreciate your thoughts so much. I hope I always have that effect on you. RobertB~ Inspiration from your work has been wonderful. Like I said before 'genius' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And Little Pepper~ I'm going to say that you are the bestest little echo I've heard in a long time ! Sneaky little thing too. Wouldn't miss you for the world. Love you ... I have proof you have a muse! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Marge, You always amaze me~ I admire you so~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
*stumbles in, late* This is a beautiful tribute... if only I were deserving! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I hope I'm not too late on this one either Marge ... we all need to pay tribute to 'you' ... marvelous poet and beautiful person Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ Thank you so much. To think that my words touch you in such a manner is just a very precious thought to me. LoveBug~ DESERVING ? DESERVING ? You were the inspiration behind my poem that I posted for you in reply to your 'The Piano' and by the way ... I titled it 'Tickling The Ivory'. I have saved it for my children. So, you are deserving alright ! Now ... go play that piano ! Rex~ Saved by the bell ! My stars .. my heart is overwhelmed with admiration for everyone of the creative minds here. 'Tis tribute enough just to be among the throngs of talent. Thank you for the thought, dear one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sneaks in a bit late...but better late than never. Marge...what a beautiful tribute you have paid to all of us and the only thing I can say is that all the thoughts you have expressed are echoed back from my heart to you. Love you my friend |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Never ever too late for a friend like you. Thank you and thank you. This piece means a lot to me simply because it reflects my feelings about having such talented and caring people that have inspired me and lifted me to new heights. I've learned so much here and thank everyone for their beautiful poetry. Wanted to tell everyone that you never know how you will inspire someone and how it will be appreciated. Much love to you also, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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