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David2
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0 posted 03-25-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for David2

Truth

A pleasant talk and not a hint of strain,
A dinner in a dimly lighted booth,
A quiet drive, a soft and peaceful rain,
Are simple joys enriched with simple truth.
The simple truth that love will not demand,
Or ever ask for more than it may give,
That love must only seek to understand,
And understanding, find its will to live.
Pretensions cast aside and egos tamed,
Our brilliant love in vibrant, fragrant bloom,
This hope of love is now a love enflamed,
And never wonders, worries, or presumes.

We'll cherish love that only we may share,
Our minds and bodies laced, intent, and bare.

© Copyright 2000 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 03-25-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful words...two falling in love together and it is just happening because it was meant to be.   James
Martie
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Beautiful!!  Sounds like the perfect love.
Nan
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... and perfect love is a good thing..
Michael
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4 posted 03-25-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Nothing so beautiful as laying your mind completely bare to the one you love.  beautiful poem.


michael
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Nothing quite like love, eh? Great poem!
Windrider Silverbreeze
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(In responce to truth)

The dark and the silver they both become one,
Lighting the dark,
And darkening the sun.
Filling the void neither could place.
To look at them now,
That smile on their face.
Their souls entertwined,
Perfect love ever known,
While stars shine down,
And make themselves known.
But none to these two,
Upon the world do they see.
Only the love that grows on,
For all eternity.

(Enjoy and wonderfully written poem of love)

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I absolutely love your sonnets, David! Very beautiful!  

Denise
Janet Marie
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another perfect poem from you today david...
i love your style...i think your gonna be seeing alot of me(smile)
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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Love is, indeed, a baring of souls caught up in life's most simple truths. What a grand and lovely piece of poetry this is.

~ Claire
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Oh...you do write a mean sonnet   Let me know when you're ready for those addresses  
 
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