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Panthers Chrysalis
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since 2000-03-25

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0 posted 2000-03-25 01:10 PM

She arises....
and dances on the wings of fantasy...
leaving brushstrokes of her desires in the virgin snow
she revels in the ecstasy of her movements
and rejoices in the echoes of her dreams
her heartbeat quickens to the evolutions of her soul
feeding her existence
embellishing her moves with a sudden
inexplicable urgent tendency to incorporate her passions into her dance
building and heightening her frenzied rhythms
til she collapses
exhausted
as the snow caresses her cheek
and she sleeps
til she awakens for the encore

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-03-25 01:15 PM

Panther~
This is just beautiful.
So serene and lovely.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Panthers Chrysalis
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since 2000-03-25

Posts 51

2 posted 2000-03-25 01:19 PM

Thanks, Marge! You brightened my day!

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-03-25 01:38 PM

Welcome to the family! This is wonderful writing. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Panthers Chrysalis
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since 2000-03-25

Posts 51

4 posted 2000-03-25 01:54 PM

Thanks for the warm welcome, Poet deVine!

David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

5 posted 2000-03-25 02:55 PM

Panther,
I loved the word usage here. Very vivid imagery. Welcome !
David2

VampDude
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since 2000-03-24

Posts 21
Canada

6 posted 2000-03-25 03:09 PM

Beautiful poem and great imagery, great work!

"So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Panthers Chrysalis
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since 2000-03-25

Posts 51

7 posted 2000-03-25 06:24 PM

David2 and VampDude....

Thank you both for taking the time to read, and comment! Glad you enjoyed it!

Windrider Silverbreeze
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since 2000-03-21

Posts 33

8 posted 2000-03-25 08:03 PM

Wellcome to Passions, very well envisioned.

Nan

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9 posted 2000-03-26 09:21 AM

"She dances on wings of fantasy.."
Very nice indeed - Welcome to Passions..

Panthers Chrysalis
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since 2000-03-25

Posts 51

10 posted 2000-03-26 11:54 AM

Windrider
Silverbreeze

Thank you for the welcome!... Happy to be here..

Panthers Chrysalis
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since 2000-03-25

Posts 51

11 posted 2000-03-26 11:58 AM

Nan...Thank you! Good thing she treads lightly...

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