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Panthers Chrysalis
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She arises....
and dances on the wings of fantasy...
leaving brushstrokes of her desires in the virgin snow
she revels in the ecstasy of her movements
and rejoices in the echoes of her dreams
her heartbeat quickens to the evolutions of her soul
feeding her existence
embellishing her moves with a sudden
inexplicable urgent tendency to incorporate her passions into her dance
building and heightening her frenzied rhythms
til she collapses
exhausted
as the snow caresses her cheek
and she sleeps
til she awakens for the encore

© Copyright 2000 Panthers Chrysalis - All Rights Reserved
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Panther~
This is just beautiful.
So serene and lovely.
    
~*Marge*~



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Thanks, Marge! You brightened my day!
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Welcome to the family! This is wonderful writing. Please check your email for a special welcome!  
Panthers Chrysalis
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Thanks for the warm welcome, Poet deVine!  
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Panther,
   I loved the word usage here. Very vivid imagery. Welcome !
     David2
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Beautiful poem and great imagery, great work!

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David2 and VampDude....

Thank you both for taking the time to read, and comment! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Wellcome to Passions, very well envisioned.

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"She dances on wings of fantasy.."
Very nice indeed - Welcome to Passions..
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Windrider
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Thank you for the welcome!... Happy to be here..
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Nan...Thank you! Good thing she treads lightly...  
 
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