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christies heart
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Rapture walks with ghosts alone
despite the fear I've come to possess.
Wake my heart in bitter silence.
It's you,
(isn't it)
for whom my loving heart beats?

Why then now, do I wish to dance
far away and in some distant hall,
where hope,
not pain,
keeps me knowing
it's you, I'm sure, it's you?

Christine.....with love?

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-25-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Why then now, do I wish to dance
far away and in some distant hall,
where hope,
not pain,
keeps me knowing
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Chris, this poem is so full of your sweetness...I LOVE this one. its perfect.
"Christine.....with love?" ...
yes, I do believe so...(smile)
dont let your doubts own you...enjoy the dance...
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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Christine...the indecision is so obvious in this work. Nicely written  
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