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In Candle's Flicker

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-25-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

I sit here
  staring at your
picture
  I sing to you
and tell you
what I cannot
bring myself to

for all I
   have left
is the memory
of you and
  this picture

I place upon
my shelf beside
   your candle
     burning
   hoping it burns
forever

I smile,  
    for there you
are, smiling back
at me

well at least
I have that


Maree
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 03-26-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-25-2000 08:28 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sadly touching and beautiful, Dark Angel. Very lovely.

Denise
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2 posted 03-25-2000 10:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Maree....this is so sad :{
big hugs to you my friend
VampDude
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3 posted 03-25-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

I have to go and get a tissue.. Very sad and moving poem, Dark Angel - great work.

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 03-25-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, DarkAngel~
This is so pretty.
It needs a beautiful title ..
May I suggest
'In Candle's Flicker'
~*Marge*~



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Moonshine
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5 posted 03-26-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

no words just.......
(((((((hugebigwarmhuggs)))))))
Severn
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6 posted 03-26-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Adding my hugs to Moonshines...

K
Dark Angel
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7 posted 03-26-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise, thank you so very much  
-----------------
Thanks Ruth, need them   *hugs back*
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VampDude,thank you you're so sweet  
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Marge Honey, that is a beautiful title, I'd love to use it for my poem   thank you, I'l lask one of the moderators  to arrange it for me   Thanks so very much for your lovely reply  
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Moonshine honey thanks   *hugs*
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Sweet butterfly, thank you hon. *hugs*  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 03-27-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
Beautiful ...
back to the top for another trip !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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9 posted 03-27-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Angel, I'm speechless. You've been writing some real sad poems here as of late.  I have to admit there pretty darn good ones too!
Meadowmuse
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10 posted 03-27-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

One can just feel the sadness that you've written into this piece.

~ Claire
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