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She is Maria

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 03-25-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

She is Maria

I just met a girl named Maria
and suddenly I found my life was not the same anymore...whoops..sorry..the lyrics from West Side Story somehow slipped in...
yet this is exactly the way I'll feel when I see Maria again.
I was always cool with her before
but now I have brand new hot feelings
and I want some more.
Maria, why did you wear that bright red blouse today?
You caught my eye and I can barely look away.
You look just like an angel cutie.
A fashion model with natural beauty.
I was sitting here minding my own business
and eating my steak and egg breakfast
then all of a sudden out of the corner of my eye
I see Maria walking by.
Now look at me looking at that silky black hair
and her beautiful face
and what else a sweet personality
loaded with charm and grace.
Maria...tell me why every time you walk by
you look so good in my eyes!!!

She is Maria
An angel in disguise
need my love and devotion
search for a sexual place to hide
as she conquers all my emotions.
Whoops...Maria...now you got Ricky Martin singing a lyric or two.
Hey..he's a very talented singer its true
and when you see his show on Sunday
he'll sing this song just for you.
Maria...I want to make you mine
I will always remember your tender lips melting into mine.
Those lucious lips filled wlith sweet spices so devine.
And as we embraced I can't erase the fragrant smell of fresh exotic flowers.
Maria...you are to me and will always be passions finest hour.
Yes...its true..I hope Ricky sings his song just for you the song he sings so well "Maria".
She is Maria...so lovely Maria.

Jameslee@March25,2000
forMaria..andRicky




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Dark Angel
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1 posted 03-25-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow! Lucky Maria, this is beautiful.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-25-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

HA HA...oh james you sweet ole tomcat...LOL
creative and cute poem...so its Maria now...
ahhh james...it must be adventure watching you work...so many women...so little time...
Loved where you asked her why she wore the red blouse...
great work james...thanks for the smiles  
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-25-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you dark angel for your wonderful comment.  It is Maria that is beautiful.
Janet you are a true sweetheart.  Maria is only a casual friend..alas I can only hope for more..but I do not expect more.  I am a man enjoying the beauty that God has placed all around me.   James
Martie
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4 posted 03-25-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is so fresh and honest, I enjoyed your breakfast with you...thanks...and I didn't get any of that cholesterol.  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 03-26-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thanks Martie for your wonderful comments...steak and eggs is my favorite breakfast but only 2 or 3 days a week..the other times cream of wheat..oatmeal..cereals and fruits.   James
JamesMichael
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6 posted 03-28-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I stopped by the Islander and gave Maria a copy of this poem much earlier today and she sat across from me and read it and she really enjoyed it and gave me a nice kiss and hug...I thought she had went to see Ricky Martin at the Blaisdell Arena on Sunday but she told me her tickets were for Monday night...so I didn't get to ask her about the show yet...hopefully next time. James
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7 posted 03-28-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

James, I must tell you that I love the way you wear your precious heart on your sleeve, at least here at Passions. I feel as though I know you, just from reading your poetry and responses. Your commentary always makes me smile, think, feel, weep...a veritable potpourri of emotion. I so admire your ability to write about how you're feeling in the moment.  

~ Claire
JamesMichael
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8 posted 03-28-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Claire your words are as lovely as a warm Hawaiian night
and as smooth as the breeze gently swaying the palm trees in illuminated moonlight.

James
CherylLynnMckee
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9 posted 03-28-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Loved it...makes me glad to be a woman..if theres men like you out there. Thanks for the smile thats still on my face.

 
hsystems
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10 posted 03-28-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

James, this is great!  Even if Maria doesn't see through to that wonderful heart, I'm sure someone will!   )

Troy

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mariee66
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11 posted 03-28-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Oh gee~
A poem just for me~

You shouldn't have   ~

Great poem~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


Butterflies_dont_cry
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12 posted 03-28-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Done with the style that only you have  
Lucky lady!!!
JamesMichael
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13 posted 03-29-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Cheryl I'm glad that you enjoyed this and you are making me glad that I'm a man.
Thanks for reading Troy and for your supportive comment...she did smile and laugh while she read this and made some nice comments..and before she left a wonderful kiss form Maria.
Marie I am happy that you enjoyed this poem.
Butterflies you have given me a compliment that I love.  I emailed a copy of this to my son who happens to think he looks like Ricky Martin and he said he likes this poem and I should publish it.  He has put a portfolio together and is trying to be a model..so if anyone has any connections let me know.  He lives in Lakewood, California.   James
JamesMichael
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14 posted 11-24-2002 01:36 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Oh my...Maria married a rich man and moved to California...but she will be back...because she is Maria...James
 
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