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Heaven's Touch (a repost cuz somebody made me feel good about it)

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 03-25-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

On there so high above she came
Born from a silver streak of flame
She tore a trail through my soul
Burning passion I cant control

Her beauty described in mere words
A sweeter song than morning birds
Who ever hope and ever try
To please her as she passes by

When she dips and when she bends
Her graceful body never ends
And when I look into her eyes
I see a fire that never dies

Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound
And then forever my life has worth
I've seen where heaven touched the earth


i decided i love you all!!! yuh yuh





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-25-2000).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 03-25-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Ya know what? You write some excellent serious poetry!  Fantastic this was!
Michael
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2 posted 03-25-2000 05:07 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Walt, you are one of the few who have ever brought me to tears with a poem.  This piece is still touches me now as it did the first time I read it.  I thank you for the repost.


Michael
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3 posted 03-25-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

I'm new here and I haven't read this before...I'm so glad you reposted it tho...its a beautiful poem  

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4 posted 03-25-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

"Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound"

Certainly worth the repost. I love the line above. Chris  
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5 posted 03-25-2000 08:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Walt! I especially loved the line:

'I've seen where heaven touched the earth'
Wow! What a line!!

Denise
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6 posted 03-25-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound
And then forever my life has worth
I've seen where heaven touched the earth

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WOW WOW

walt...this is perfection of poetry...
I love this passionate and beautiful poem...
so glad you reposted it....now it can make all of us "feel good about it"  
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
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7 posted 03-25-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Walt...you know I love this serious side of you. When you write like this, you shine my friend  
Love ya too by the way, yep we do...yah!
Mistikman
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8 posted 03-25-2000 01:31 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Sigh... this is wonderful walt. I have seen this sight myself recently, but alas, the angel is always just out of reach....
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9 posted 03-25-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

W.O.W.~
What thoughts of beauty.
Fluttering softly.
I like this facet of you very much.
~*Marge*~


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10 posted 03-25-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Walt. . . this is excellent!!!

I love this. . . it's so romantic and heartfelt. . . it moves me. . . I think that I'll send this one right back to the top. . .

Thanks for the re-post!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

tracie66
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11 posted 03-25-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This is one hell of a poem
EXCELLENT is the word
        


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Martie
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12 posted 03-25-2000 06:09 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is really very beautiful and well done, Walt.  Bravo!!
Nan
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13 posted 03-26-2000 08:30 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

"... where heaven touched the earth"

Pretty awesome stuff, wow...
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