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The Beast Within

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VampDude
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0 posted 03-24-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Every morning, I awake to face another day,
Same old thing, the same routine, I work but cannot play,
I slowly make my way through time and leave my trail behind,
I scream for help, no one can hear, feels like I'm bound and tied,
but then the hour approaches, when daytime turns to night,
I feel something inside of me, this thing I cannot fight,
I look upon my new-found self, I feel like I'm reborn,
All my thoughts of good are gone, my mind is ripped and torn,
The night brings out the rage in me, I found my beast within,
I fall asleep as night-time ends, to have this start again...
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 03-24-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is INTENSE, VampDude, and how well i can relate to the vicious cycle of mood!  And you portrayed it superbly!  Welcome!
Lone Wolf
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Vamp Dude, welcome to passions.  Great poem.  I think we all have a beast within.  It is up to us to tame it.  Good luck!

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Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome...  
tracie66
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VampDude
Intensely deep
I liked it
tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
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