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Tangled In Your Love

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Moonlight is gently eclipsed
Luminescence delicately shadowed
For but a single moment
As the misty teardrops drift
From my tangled thoughts
Alone in somber solitude
I dream of all I've forgotten
And begin to fade...
Whispy tendrils pull at me
Threading throughout my spirit
And sprayed with your image
The curled fingers of smog
Slowly fall away
To reveal love
Lighted in tender eyes...
Like the angels' sweetened kiss
You enrapture me
And I begin to gently lower
Drifting, wafting downward
Landing freely
Within your waiting arms.

Never in solitude am I
When entangled in your love.





 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-24-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Alwye--this is beautiful!  Spiritual love described!  Thank you.  
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2 posted 03-24-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Alwye, you don't miss a beat. Excellent, as usual.  
hoot_owl_rn
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"Never in solitude am I
When entangled in your love."
What a finish to an already great poem  



Marge Tindal
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4 posted 03-25-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alwye~

Simply stunning.
Feather-soft, drifting gently.
Eclipsed in the final two lines.
Keep this muse close to you.
She is magic within your pen.
~*Marge*~



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Alwye
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serenity- Thank you for reading and enjoying it!

Balladeer- It's always an honor to have you read my work.  Thank your for your kindness.

hoot- Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Marge- Your wonderful comments are like gold. Thank you so much for your kind words.  


 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


Dark Angel
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6 posted 03-26-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

ohh this is heavenly Alwye....

Never in solitude am I
When entangled in your love.Beautiful lines!


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dusk Treader
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7 posted 03-26-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Krista, you're never anything less than marvelous.  A truly beautiful poem.

 Abrahm Simons

Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.

Janet Marie
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8 posted 03-26-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

wow this is so beautiful, so calming and peaceful..almost like dreaming...very nice, very...
take care, jm

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Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
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Alwye, wonderful you entangled me with this piece. I kinda like the sound of it, please entangle me.

Parker
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10 posted 03-28-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

That was beautiful..the words roll off your tounge..leaving you wanting more.

 
Alwye
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Dark Angel- Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Dusk- I'm marvelous, am I?  lol..well, thanks my friend.  

Janet- Sometimes love can seem like a dream..thank you for you comments.

Haleyja- Thanks!  I too rather liked the thought of being entangled in love.

Cheryl- Thank you also!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


Corinne
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a lovely poem!

Corinne
 
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