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First Love - One Love

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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FIRST LOVE - ONE LOVE

David, you were my heart and soul
How I longed for you to hold me
How I longed for you to know
Just how much I loved you
Why did you have to go

I have grown into a woman now
And I know you would be proud
But oh to see your smiling face
In amongst a crowd......


Roniece Dawson-Bruce


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Those first loves have the greatest impact on us, don't they? Even long after they are gone.

Denise
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Roniece~
Oh, what a sweet piece.
I remember that 'first love'
and I'm fortunate enough to
run into him from time to time.
Hope you get to do that also.
~*Marge*~


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Wow...what a wonderful take on first love  
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This is a beautiful love poem! I LOVE love poems!   Keep up the good work!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 03-25-2000 05:21 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Thank you all for your nice comments - my first love was oh so long ago - and although he is with God now I still think of him.
Roniece
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This is a lovely poem capturing that innocence and questioning of a first love

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
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I'm going to start crying, it seemed so real, so moving....Roneice you need to get writing again!!!

 Kathleen

 
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