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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan

0 posted 2000-03-24 02:27 PM



Have you ever stopped to feel
Your veins beneath your skin
They are the essence of your movement
They are your power from within
If you think about it long enough
You can trace them to your brain
But take my warning and do not think
It will make you go insane
You will start to feel your heartbeat
Louder, louder it will get
until no longer can you focus
And no longer can you forget
You try to go out in public
To get away from all the strain
But in every person, all you see
Are those wretched, evil, veins




 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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Jenna Barkley
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 16

1 posted 2000-03-24 02:39 PM


This poem is great! Keep up the great work!

~Jen

Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-03-24 02:56 PM


This IS a neat poem...with elements of both light and darkness, reads very well. Welcome to Passions. (love your name/pen name)  

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