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Until there was You...
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Until there was You... |
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Rod17NYS Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 15 |
Until there was You.. I thought I knew myself, I thought I knew where i was, But the only thing i really knew, is where I've been, And that i wish i could hide... cuz it's a place with no hope, no peace, where no sun would ever shine... Until there was You..You.. You changed my life, You made me want to smile You set me free by making me lose myself in your arms...but there're still times, where im dragged into that same dark past, if You knew the pain, maybe You'd understand...it's cold in here..I strive to reach your hand... But after the storm is over, Im only left with the pieaces of a confused future, and as i put them together, i see what i still got...that's the story of my life..just hope i never lose the pieaces of your heart... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I see you reposted this with correction in the spelling. For future reference there is a little icon at the top of your poem, the one with the little pencil on it. That is the edit function. You can go in there to change or correct anything that you'd like. Again, welcome to Passions, Rod!  Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Sometimes we meet that one person who turns our life upside down....changes our world our view... "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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